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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Jul 30, 2014.

  1. rgsrinivasan

    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    There was a golden time when I
    Was enjoying the spring of my life.
    At times I wondered if it were a lie,
    But enjoyed that all without a strife.

    No doubt, you are the biggest my dear!
    Your tiny world was expanding fast.
    You asked and asked without any fear.
    I fumbled, blinked and felt so lost!

    So proudly I came back to you,
    With answers at the earliest, but then
    You didn't stop. Instead, asked a few
    More to keep me working hard to win.

    Most often you questioned why,
    Things were as such and I gave up
    Saying that such things always lie
    That way, but you then looked up.

    I wasn't defiant then and now.
    You grew up and earned accolades,
    Making me prouder and my love
    Is the same and I always prayed

    For your good, hoping that I will
    Get the answer to my only question.
    Why did you leave me dear? I will
    Wait till my end which I know not when!
     
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  2. kishoreg

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    Good lines expressing the feelings in a more beautiful way with simple usage of words :)

    :thumbsup rgs thumbsup !
     
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    I will Wait till my end which I know not when! :coffee
     
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  4. rgsrinivasan

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    Thanks Kishoreg for your instant appreciation and the first feedback. Thanks for your continuous support too. -rgs
     
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    I hope that you pointed out that line for, it had an appeal, RadhiMom.
    Thanks for your feedback. Happy to get a first from you. -rgs
     
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    Only the last two, AmmuluR? :)
    Just kidding.

    Thanks for your appreciation and feedback. -rgs
     
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