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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Jul 23, 2014.

  1. rgsrinivasan

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    At times I feel only this!
    I can't bear this anymore.
    Yet I know that without this,
    I can't be living anymore.

    It was there within me always!
    But I felt it as something new
    When it sprang up stalling my ways.
    I gave myself as if I were a due.

    Never have I thought how it would
    Feel to be the burning wick before.
    It brings new light and warmth good,
    But consumes that wick to the core.

    How can joy and sorrow be
    So close that I feel both
    Within a short span? I see
    That I love them both.

    Now that I felt a bit of it,
    I can't be myself anymore.
    I hereby thus conclude that
    Love transforms you more!
     
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  2. kishoreg

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    Joy and sorrows , treating them equally would give us a sense of happiness
     
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    :thumbsup Great Lines !
     
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  4. PushpavalliSrinivasan

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    Dear RGS,
    To attain the state of equilibrium is not easy and those who are able to attain it are really blessed.
    PS
     
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  5. rgsrinivasan

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    Thanks Kishoreg, for your first feedback and like. Actually this is about someone who fell in love. He / she experiences heaven and hell within a short while and loves both extremes. -rgs
     
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    Thanks Darmesh. Happy to receive a first from you. -rgs
     
  7. rgsrinivasan

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    I agree Madam. This is more about love and the person experiencing it. Thanks for your feedback. -rgs
     
  8. kishoreg

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    Yes Rgs well said Love is the origin of both :)
     
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    Well said Kishoreg. -rgs
     
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