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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Jul 22, 2014.

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  1. Jul 22, 2014 #1
    rgsrinivasan

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    A man who walks with a smile,
    Prodding with his light stick,
    Another who's there for a while,
    Selling cakes, spread on bricks,

    The beggar whose voice isn't good,
    Yet not discouraged, she sings,
    The boy who holds her good,
    Follows her without thinking.

    The man who had many rough years,
    Adding more lines to his forehead,
    The woman who holds her bag dear,
    Though it is torn, have all led

    Me to one conclusion my dear!
    No matter what happens to whom,
    The world just moves on here!
    I too should move on soon!
     
    rgsrinivasan, Jul 22, 2014
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  2. Jul 22, 2014 #2
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    Truly said sir, we are moving on without any bothers for others, as we think ours is a bigger headache so why bother.. hard truth still you are right we move on.. I TOO move on....
     
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  3. Jul 22, 2014 #3
    kishoreg

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    Its the underlying fact of life Rgs, nice execution of it through your poem...

    Keep moving ....................
     
    kishoreg, Jul 22, 2014
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  4. Jul 22, 2014 #4
    rgsrinivasan

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    In fact I am amused at the open ended nature of what I wrote, after reading your feedback God2014.
    I was focusing more to moving on instead of brooding over a sorrow, realizing that the world will not stop for you. But you interpreted it as our general indifference towards others. Surprisingly, both fit here. Thanks for a lovely feedback. -rgs
     
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  5. Jul 22, 2014 #5
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    Should I say, am lucky enough to get more feedback from you Kishoreg?
    Thanks so much for your appreciation and feedback. -rgs
     
    rgsrinivasan, Jul 22, 2014
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  6. Jul 22, 2014 #6
    kishoreg

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    Iam lucky Rgs to give feedback

    Its my pleasure ....kudos
     
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    rgsrinivasan

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    In general, the writer is of no use when there are no readers, Kishoreg.
    So, I am more happy to get your time and feedback. -rgs
     
    rgsrinivasan, Jul 23, 2014
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  8. Jul 23, 2014 #8
    kishoreg

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    I liked your thoughts and the way you deal with them in a poetic way -rgs
    do write more and inspire us!
     
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  9. Jul 23, 2014 #9
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    Sure Kishoreg. Thanks for your support and motivation. -rgs
     
    rgsrinivasan, Jul 23, 2014
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    That's a 'wah' 'wah' deserving poem rgs.
     
    Pallavi4me, Jul 23, 2014
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