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Woe of a Heart

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by periamma, Jul 22, 2014.

  1. periamma

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    Oh my dear stupid girl
    why do you dump me
    with all your feelings
    When you are happy
    Laugh loudly
    when you are sad
    Share with your dear ones
    Face your Problems
    With ease and effort
    Don't Thrust over me
    And make me overburden
    Which could occur
    A sudden outburst
     
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  2. PriyaSrini

    PriyaSrini Moderator Staff Member Platinum IL'ite

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    Words spoken from your heart. Nice :thumbsup
     
  3. periamma

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    PriyaSrini thanks for your fb.
     
  4. GoogleGlass

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    Nice one P'

    Heartless we are to our own heart!!!!!
     
  5. periamma

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    Thanks GG.Very nice words
     
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    good one, periamma.. if at all a heart can speak, probably it would speak only these. not to thrust, dump and burden it with feelings. beautifully said :thumbsup
     
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    Excellent !:)
     
  9. PushpavalliSrinivasan

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    Dear Periyamma,
    That's a good one. Instead of bottling up everything in our heart better to share our joys and sorrows with persons who are close to our heart.
    PS
     
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