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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by periamma, Jul 7, 2014.

  1. periamma

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    Love is blind
    It holds someone
    To have support

    Love is not a path of Roses
    But mixed with thorny bushes
    Thorns Prick your sole
    While words Prick your soul

    Steps taken with care
    Make your Mind sore
    Only Two hands are with you
    when you are in desparation

    More hands you need
    To bring down your depression
    If one hand let you down
    There are other hands to hold you tight


    Think a while
    choose the best
    To have a life of
    Happiness and bright future


    (This is for the couples let down by Parents)
     
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    vathsala30 thanks for your first response
     
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    absolutely true for any relationship. excellent words of wisdom...
     
  5. periamma

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    Thanks Google Glass
     
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    You are most welcome
     
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    @periamma,

    Good one.

    Love is not a path of Roses
    But mixed with thorny bushes
    Thorns Prick your sole
    While words Prick your soul

    Think a while
    choose the best
    To have a life of
    Happiness and bright future

    Superb words.
     
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    @Harini73 Thanks for your appreciation
     
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    @periamma, Lovely poem on Love, wow you write so beautifully in English too, I want to see more new posts from you, here are a fee themes to pick a Nature, (flowers, birds, waterfall) or anything you like. Come on Periamma, lead us kindly and enlighten us with your poetry. What beautiful lines, I second @googleglass's comment.
     

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