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I will always love your lies...

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  1. Aug 12, 2013 #1
    Dinny

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    You said "dont trust me"
    And i believed you to a certain degree
    You said "i cant be your friend"
    And i knew you could not pretend.
    You said "go away i dont want to hurt a flower as delicate as you"
    And that must be when i fell for you
    You only told me the truth ,where was the lie??
    I could not find any..You never lied to me..i still believe..
    You were like a heavy wind carrying rain
    The downpour came unto me chilling me to the bone..
    In your hands i gave my life's dice
    Coz i felt i had never met a guy so nice.
    You reminded me "you are crossing your limits dove"
    But its hard...very hard to make someone understand who is hit by love
    Time passed and somewhere i felt you did get possesive about me
    Coz i saw jealousy in your eyes when i took somebody's name
    You knew i would get jealous too
    Whenever i saw another gal with you...
    Things have changed since then
    Our friendship broke...or did you just let it happen??
    You came back once to say " i am sorry i have hurt my flower"
    Did you realise you have given me some beautiful memories which will be cherished by me forever...
    Its hard to hate you
    and difficult to forgive you
    I have never seen any love for me in your eyes
    May be you never loved me...
    I hate you...i hate you ...but i still love your lies...
     
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  2. Aug 12, 2013 #2
    RadiantFlower

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    So sad. I think it takes a certain kind of woman to be attracted to 'bad boys'.

    What's even sadder is that such girls and women can be helped, but only if they want to be helped.
    Too often they remain in denial.


     
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  3. Aug 12, 2013 #3
    Dinny

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    Yep good girls fall for bad boys...sad but true...

    Now disclaimer: i am not a good girl.So that girl in the poem was not really me.:)
     
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    RadiantFlower

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    LOL! How could anyone ever make the mistake of thinking that! :thumbsup

    I think it's a powerful, thought-provoking poem - I don't know how I could have forgotten to mention that in my previous post. :bonkI am sorry Dinny.
     
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    Dinny

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    Ohhww
    Pls dont embarrass me with your sorry...
    I always luv reading your feedbacks....thank you so much Radiantflower for gracing my thread :)
     
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    rgsrinivasan

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    Nice one Dinny. Only that love is gender agnostic and sufferers can be on either sides.
    And I was quite amused when I read a line from one of my friends years back. The line was, "If it hurts, its not love!". The first thought that came to me was "Rubbish!".

    And just a fictitious response to this verse:
    Someone told me that love and hate
    Are two sides of the same coin, dear.
    So, I am happy that you at least hate
    Me now, but I can't be anywhere near

    You and feel so sick about myself
    For I am in your memories now.
    Believe me! Am not a worthy self
    To be remembered by you anyhow.

    Love requires one to be honest
    Above all else. I know that now.
    Even now I am not at my best,
    But am not at all honest, you know?

    How can I love you knowing that
    Yours will always surpass mine?
    Before a torrential downpour but,
    Can a drop of water ever shine?

    You are too soft and delicate. Yes.
    I don't want to ruin you but.
    If I am there, I am not sure
    Whether I'll remain that way but.

    You are not a toy and should not be
    Toyed upon! I know that too well dear.
    Staying away, am doing good. See!
    You deserve and will get someone better!
     
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    Twinkel

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    Nice one dinny darl!
     
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    GoogleGlass

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    Very good D' - Nice one.

    If it is lice and not lies use this: :)

    lice-prevention-shampoo.jpg
     
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    iyerviji

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    I did not know you rock in poems also Dinny dear , good one
     
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    OHHH - Myyy -Goddddd

    Rgs that poem was beautifulllll...

    Let me try it again hmmm

    I wish you could come and see
    that without you its hard for me
    Please dont go away
    I want you here with me..please stay
    If you were to disappear
    Then i swear i would also not be here
    This time please dont leave....dont you dare
    I cant live in this constant fear
    That one day you will go away ..never to come back
    But why cant you see
    That all i want is just you and me
    Just you...and me
     
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