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I will always love your lies...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Dinny, Aug 12, 2013.

  1. Dinny

    Dinny IL Hall of Fame

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    :rotfl

    thats fine littl.....

    You see there can be copyright issues when things are copy-pasted from other sites.And such posts are then moved to "forwards & jokes section".

    Btw i am still expecting you to reply back to Rgs's posts....but this time in your own words. :thumbsup:
     
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  2. rgsrinivasan

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    Nice one Dinny - The situation is like two poles which could never meet.

    But what I am about to write now may sound a bit cliched [courtesy - many movies - tamil and hindi]

    There is a saying that one would at least
    Feel happy for being used up or spent
    Rather than being ignored. So please
    Think about that. That what I meant.

    While I was a kid, someone taught me
    About the poles and magnetism which
    Was so good and entertaining to me
    And I wished to join the like poles which

    Always repelled each other then!
    Alas! My failures started from then!
    I took a magnet and broke it then
    Hoping that that was the time when

    The rule might have changed, but alas
    I was branded a fool for a while.
    Then came a point when I was at a loss
    Reading matter and antimatter while

    Doing my undergrad and wondered what
    Would happen if two small particles of
    Matter and antimatter met. That part
    Had always puzzled and I was soon off,

    To get the answer for that puzzle.
    The answer did shook me in full.
    I didn't believe it, but was troubled
    That I couldn't get a chance to fulfill

    That urge, so I gave that one up.
    Then I turned towards nature a bit.
    When do this sky and that sea meet?
    I wondered and decided to put my bit

    In finding the answer to that question
    And stopped after seeing you then!
    For a moment, I felt that deep passion
    And realized that its just a matter of when

    That we two meet and be one,
    Earning ourselves both a win.
    Seems but you are like me but,
    Confused and also confusing!

    Shrug off those fears now dear!
    If I were with you even for a day,
    I will see death which would then fear
    Coming near me again any day!

    Love makes mortal souls like us
    Immortal, so come! Don't delay!
    Don't fear about living endless!
    Who needs it? You need not pray!

    Time is relative, and thats a fact.
    A minute of fulfilled life is worth
    Than many lifetimes and in fact,
    We are lucky to realize that mirth!
     
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  3. Dinny

    Dinny IL Hall of Fame

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    Rgs i loved everything about that poem....from magnetism to matter-antimatter and everything else.
    that was cute.

    Well this is all i could think of in reply......



    Oh what fate
    I cant not die with you
    Because one of us must wait
    to shut the other’s gaze down.
    oh dear god what curse is it that i own??

    I have to stand by
    And see you freeze.
    My tragedy is death's privilege.

    Why is it that i cant live with the one i love
    God indeed you test true love and ask me how??
     
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  4. prettydevil

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    aahhhh.. I now get it :hide: :bonk.... makes much sense now.... and dunt be sorry.... u wrote it wonderfully... it is me who didnt get it... :bonk :bonk

    keep writing dear... its very good..
     
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  5. Dinny

    Dinny IL Hall of Fame

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    arreeeeey where were you hon??
    I searched for you here there...everywhere
    Didnt see you in your mushayaara thread too :-(
     
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  6. littl

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    am so glad rgs ..... :)



    dear oh dear, i truly love you..
    that's all i wanted to tell you..
    i do' t feel its enough for you..
    there are million drafts waiting for you..
    but they cant just reach you..
    i built a craft to reach you..
    but i really donno where are you..
    i keep on searching for you..
    to get a chance to say i love you..

    dear oh dear, i truly love you..
    that's all i wanted to tell you..
     
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    That's really speechless ..... :hatsoff
     
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  8. Dinny

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    i am impressed...good one littl :clap;
     
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    I am a good Samaritan
    I have cash for your ticket
    I don't travel with out a ticket
    Once I have cash for my ticket
    Shall kick the bucket to join you
    Dear wait for me at the arrival platform
    Surely shall arrive soon to hold your hand :)
     
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  10. Dinny

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    :rotfl :rotfl....cute one

    are we talking about Switzerland again??
    This time i wont take off in plane
    i am planing for a train
    want to go to himalayas this time
    Want to experience the white mountain
    So is the samaritan
    ready to join??
    again?? :rotfl:
     
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