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love is a spice

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by parineetha, Nov 9, 2010.

  1. parineetha

    parineetha IL Hall of Fame

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    A little bit of this, a little bit of that,
    Make our lives a little bit of spice,
    If you smile, I grin; if you frown, I sulk.
    But if you’re sorry, I melt as ice.
    If you laugh, I giggle; if you scream, I panic
    But if u console, I light up as moon.
    If you tease, I shy; if you yell, I cry,
    But if you cry, I may even die.
    A little bit of all these, is a mix of life,
    So paint my life, black and white.
     
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  2. Ramavyasarajan

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    Excellent poem.

    Ramavyasaajan
     
  3. parineetha

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    thanks a lot Ramavyasarajan. Gud motivation for my very first post..
     
  4. Sangamithra

    Sangamithra New IL'ite

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    Hi Parineetha,

    The lines " if you yell, I cry, But if you cry, I may even die."
    is too good. So touching and well written. Keep it up!
     
  5. parineetha

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    thanks a lot sangamithra..
    I too love those lines..
     
  6. ShailRaghuvansh

    ShailRaghuvansh Silver IL'ite

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    Hi Parineetha,

    Just read this poem. Nice one.

    My advice to all poetry lovers. Never give up writing poetry.

    Nice Day
    Shail
     
  7. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hello Parineetha
    Only when there is spices in life we will learn the true love in life isn't it...........
    Very well penned.
     
  8. parineetha

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    Very true Aruna..Life is a potpourri of all flovoured spices..
    thanks for your feedback
    -Parineetha
     
  9. malligashivaram

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    Aruna your Poem is so well written --so simple so sweet--loved it read it 4 times congrats for make life a little bit of spice so well worth reading:thumbsup:thumbsup:thumbsup
     
  10. Priyapradeep

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    Excellent poem yaar. While reading i went through all emotions with a great Smile. Simple lines having stong meaning. :thumbsup Great work
     

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