New Line poems

A girl in love
if cheated pregnant
if cheats marriage

Grandfather caughs in dark
Thinking of grandma?

In English school
Child cries.. amma

A girl's grievance

School subjects..my choice
Dresses to wear..my choice
Jwellaries to wear..my choice
Food items to eat..my choice
Going to movies...my choice
Bridegroom for me is your choice
my dear parents,
Where is the justice?

To get peace of mind
I went to learn yoga
By my side in the class
she in a tight dress
The peace of mind
was broken into pieces

again its wonderfull!i really enjoyed it...ur poems r deeply philosophical..i love to read it....so much is there in few lines...i really appreciate ur talent..
aami

The meaning is beautifully conveyed with minimum words! Congrats for having thought of this.

Originally Posted by Malathijagan

The meaning is beautifully conveyed with minimum words! Congrats for having thought of this.

Thanks, Malathijagan. I need not have to praise your poems which has won the acclaim already from many ilites.

Regards,

TDU

Hi,
The satire in those lines are excellent!!! None can just read them without saying a word of appreciation!
I love to read you and waiting for more.... the saying goes....''thunder comes before the lightening'', awaiting the light and fury.
Regards,
Reeja

Hi, reeja,

I am thrilled to have you as my fan. Yes, you can expect more poems along these lines from me.

Regards,

TDU

Fantastic poems sirji..good..Nicely written, short n sweet !!