for my wedding Anniversary.. सप्रेम

wisha · #1 (**permalink**) 25th January 2010, 06:49 AM

सप्रेम

सोचा फूल दूँ...
लगा मुरझा जायेंगे,
कब तक हम दोनों के संग,
वो रह पाएंगे...

सोचा दूँ उपहार,
क्या हमेशा वो रह पाएंगे,
संभालोगे कितना भी तुम,
वो पुराने हो जायेंगे...

लगा संग चलूँ,
एक नई जगह पर,
क्या घर सा सुकून दे पाएंगे,
हम वापस चले आयेंगे..

तब पिरोई भावनाएं,
और बनायीं ये कविता,
एक प्रेम ही तो है ऐसा,
जिसे सप्रेम हमेशा दे पाएंगे..

I wanted to give my DH an anniversary gift... finally came up with this idea.
please,give your opinion...

with a wish ,
Wish@

Sriniketan · #2 (**permalink**) 27th January 2010, 07:06 PM

Belated Wedding Anniversary wishes to you and your dh, wisha!

I could have enjoyed more, if there is a translation to it!

sriniketan

Custard · #3 (**permalink**) 27th January 2010, 07:47 PM

Hello Wisha,

Belated Wedding Anniversary wishes

.....
I go with Sriniketan, if there was a Translation, I could have enjoyed it !!

wisha · #4 (**permalink**) 28th January 2010, 03:20 AM

Thanks a ton for wishes... here is the translation(i hope it can express as well)
with love
I though of giving flowers to you,
but i afraid,those will get dry,
how long will they stay along with us?

i thought of giving gifts to you,
but how long you can keep those same,
however care you'll take,
they will get old.....

then i thought of going a beautiful place with you,
but may that give comfort of home,
however we travel,
we have to come back home...

finally i thought to give a unique gift,
that is gift of my love,
because that is the only gift,
which i can give you whole life with love....

Custard · #5 (**permalink**) 28th January 2010, 03:38 AM

Wisha, Beautiful poem with a wonderful meaning !!!

Once again, HAPPY MARRIED LIFE !!!

wisha · #6 (**permalink**) 28th January 2010, 07:26 AM

Thanks again dear...Best wishes to you tooo

Sriniketan · #7 (**permalink**) 28th January 2010, 09:32 AM

Thanks a lot wisha for listenting to our 'plea' and translating the same..

Really a very very sweet one..did you show it to your dh..and what was his reaction?

sriniketan

Custard · #8 (**permalink**) 28th January 2010, 11:29 AM

You are Welcome Wisha and Thanks to you !!!

wisha · #9 (**permalink**) 29th January 2010, 02:14 AM

hey sri...

i made a googlesite for him with our pics in past two years.. including a slideshow of 10 wedding pics..there are my few poems about different emotions..like love,thanks,hopes,care etc..and this was the last poem as gift of love...
he liked the whole thing and overwhelmed with emotions.. everything was quiet gr8..
As we had great celebration at 12 midnight..following a dinner on anniversary night on a roof top restaurant... it was magical..

hey custard,

you gave me an idea to post english translations of my hindi poems...so, it can access a wide range of readers..
thanks ..

with a wish.,
Wish@

wisha · #10 (**permalink**) 29th January 2010, 02:15 AM

hey sri...

i made a googlesite for him with our pics in past two years.. including a slideshow of 10 wedding pics..there are my few poems about different emotions..like love,thanks,hopes,care etc..and this was the last poem as gift of love...
he liked the whole thing and overwhelmed with emotions.. everything was quiet gr8..
As we had great celebration at 12 midnight..following a dinner on anniversary night on a roof top restaurant... it was magical..

with a wish.,
Wish@