Dawn of Love!

After twists and turns I found
The road to love
T’was narrow
Wondered how I’d tread
But you held my hand
And guided me

I knew we would surpass
All odds, so prosaic
In comparison
Love ruled
Passion supported
And we grew

And there it was
The shiny morn
We bathed in sunshine
And basked
In the glory of dawn
Bringing more hopes

Of a life together
Not devoid of thorns
But we shall
Tread carefully
Cause what we have
This treasure
Can never again be found...

Love,
Devika
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dear mole,
after seeing your superb narrationabout love and the life partner, i can express my feelings like this only. kindly excuse me if it is not up to your mark. ( which is so high for me to reach.)
When memories fade
When I forget the days of the week
And the months of the year
When I mix names
And faces
The memory of you (that is you mole)
Will always shine bright and clear
Your image
Has been burnt to my memory
I will never forget your poem and the impact it made.
with love
mom.

Devika,
A nice one...which shows deep love for one another...at time of adversities too...so this is called the dawn of love...very very good..

Padmini ma'am,
You had scaled yet another height...
Very nice one from you too..

Enjoyed both of your poems..

sriniketan

Thanx Mom, Lovely to have you inaugurate this post. and your poem is absolutely splendid. Loved it..

Im so thrilled to know you liked my poem Mom .... Im dancing in gleeeeeeee:)))))))))))))))))

Love,
Devika

Originally Posted by Padmini

dear mole,
after seeing your superb narrationabout love and the life partner, i can express my feelings like this only. kindly excuse me if it is not up to your mark. ( which is so high for me to reach.)
When memories fade
When I forget the days of the week
And the months of the year
When I mix names
And faces
The memory of you (that is you mole)
Will always shine bright and clear
Your image
Has been burnt to my memory
I will never forget your poem and the impact it made.
with love
mom.

Thankyou dear Srini,

Good to see you here and lovely to have your views on this...Means a lot to me:)))))

Love,
Devika

Originally Posted by Sriniketan

Devika,
A nice one...which shows deep love for one another...at time of adversities too...so this is called the dawn of love...very very good..

Padmini ma'am,
You had scaled yet another height...
Very nice one from you too..

Enjoyed both of your poems..

sriniketan

Hi Poetess
Nice poem on Love, even though there are some downs in life, the togetherness will always take us forward in life.

Hi Padmini
you have summed up a nice one for this Mole............hehehehe

Dear Devika

It was the dawn of hope
And I felt it deep in my bones
My body was asleep
And my mind was in a daze
And then you came in
Every sense in my body woke up
Nobody wants to miss the trip of a lifetime
That lasts the rest of your life
The earlier you get in
The longer it lasts
The deeper you feel
The more sincere your intentions
The greater the feeling of freedom
The more intense the trust and respect
I feel as free as a bird
While you hold me so tight in your arms
I spread my wings
And fly straight into the horizon of your love

love
Santosh

My dear Devikutty,

Greetings to the Bard of IL….been a long time since you visited these hallowed portals ! A warm welcome to your avtar of dear little Neiv......she's your best mascot!

Lovely reading your romantic poem which is inspiring as it will renew spirits and refresh relationships for all those who read.It is beautiful piece that will touch anyone’s soul.
Supreme happiness in Life lies in being able to love and be loved.Your lines paint an exquisite picture of this truth and the vivid imagery of body and spirit are very impressive.
Tender moods as when the beloved will be by your side to guide you as you tread thorny paths are very well conveyed.
Love is universal and timeless yet very individual, filtered by ones own life and expectations.
You have portrayed that togetherness is far more than just a word, it is a dream to fulfill and cherish and it will become a way of life as one matures facing the good times and the not so good times with everlasting hope.
This romantic poem must have made your beloved float on Cloud 9 surely !

Beautiful piece as always.

Love,
L chechi

Hi Queeny:))))

You said it buddy...true ... together we can brave all storms:)))

Thankyou for stepping here Aruna... means a lot to me


Yeah I agree about Mom shes written very well:)))))

Love,
Devika

Originally Posted by Arunarc

Hi Poetess
Nice poem on Love, even though there are some downs in life, the togetherness will always take us forward in life.

Hi Padmini
you have summed up a nice one for this Mole............hehehehe

Hi Queeny:))))

You said it buddy...true ... together we can brave all storms:)))

Thankyou for stepping here Aruna... means a lot to me


Yeah I agree about Mom shes written very well:)))))

Love,
Devika

Originally Posted by Arunarc

Hi Poetess
Nice poem on Love, even though there are some downs in life, the togetherness will always take us forward in life.

Hi Padmini
you have summed up a nice one for this Mole............hehehehe