Dawn of Love!

Santosh,

That was awesome..

You fly straight to the horizon,
I hold you tight
As sunrise and set
hold a new meaning
with you by my side
the journey so precious
Times of love ahead
and blissfully beckoning
nourished by comfort
as we live cocooned together.


Love,
Devika

Originally Posted by uncannybal

Dear Devika

It was the dawn of hope
And I felt it deep in my bones
My body was asleep
And my mind was in a daze
And then you came in
Every sense in my body woke up
Nobody wants to miss the trip of a lifetime
That lasts the rest of your life
The earlier you get in
The longer it lasts
The deeper you feel
The more sincere your intentions
The greater the feeling of freedom
The more intense the trust and respect
I feel as free as a bird
While you hold me so tight in your arms
I spread my wings
And fly straight into the horizon of your love

love
Santosh

Dear Dear Chechi,

Gooooood to have you here... yeah Neiv is my luckkkkkkkkyyyyyyyy mascot:)))))

Chechi your FB eulogises love to the epitome of worship.... Im almost tempted to ask you to post a few romantic ones... An adam and eve sans Satyam:))) Im sure it will be a classic....

Good to know you liked the blog Chechi.... Your presence here makes all the difference to this otherwise dull thread:)))))))))))


Love,
Devikutty

Originally Posted by Paulina

My dear Devikutty,

Greetings to the Bard of IL….been a long time since you visited these hallowed portals ! A warm welcome to your avtar of dear little Neiv......she's your best mascot!

Lovely reading your romantic poem which is inspiring as it will renew spirits and refresh relationships for all those who read.It is beautiful piece that will touch anyone’s soul.
Supreme happiness in Life lies in being able to love and be loved.Your lines paint an exquisite picture of this truth and the vivid imagery of body and spirit are very impressive.
Tender moods as when the beloved will be by your side to guide you as you tread thorny paths are very well conveyed.
Love is universal and timeless yet very individual, filtered by ones own life and expectations.
You have portrayed that togetherness is far more than just a word, it is a dream to fulfill and cherish and it will become a way of life as one matures facing the good times and the not so good times with everlasting hope.
This romantic poem must have made your beloved float on Cloud 9 surely !

Beautiful piece as always.

Love,
L chechi

Dear Devika mam,
Lovely poem,
Perfect love should be like this, together at difficult times too.

Hi Devika,

Nice poem regarding love.

Want to see more.

Regards

Seema

Wow Devika dear,

Lovely one as usual......the lines, Path being narrow and the twists and turns, but Love and someone's hand guiding ...were all beautiful lines....so was the last para, ....
"Tread carefully
Cause what we have
This treasure
Can never again be found..."

Lovely lovely.....really made my day! Am i happy that i visited IL after a long time.....

Hope you are doing fine .....thanks for being here and i was happy to see all the other inspired poets complimenting you in their style.....so you have become a source of more poetic outpourings!

Dear Devika, A nice poem!

Though the path seems to be rough,
It will not be found tough,
If we tread on hand in hand,
till we reach the journey's end!
love,
PS

Dear Nithu,

Thankyou so much for your valuable comment. Glad to know you approved of the poem:))))

Love,
Devika

Originally Posted by Nithu

Dear Devika mam,
Lovely poem,
Perfect love should be like this, together at difficult times too.

Dear Seema,

Lovely to know you enjoyed the poem . I have written quite a few romantic ones here. Do check them out:)))

Love,
Devika

Originally Posted by Nandaabhi

Hi Devika,

Nice poem regarding love.

Want to see more.

Regards

Seema

Dear Sudha,

To say that you were missed is gross understatement. Gooooooood to see you here and thrilled to bits to know you arrival after the sabbatical was just in time to visit this post:)) Wow guess im lucky;)

I'm very well dear and hope you are too:)))

Glad to know you liked the poem Sudha.. Comments like this from you always serves as the eternal motivator.

Yeah when you have your loved one with you , you can together brave the dark nights and welcome the beautiful dawn.


Now PLEASE DONT VANISH...

Love n tons of it,
Devika

Originally Posted by sudhavnarasimhan

Wow Devika dear,

Lovely one as usual......the lines, Path being narrow and the twists and turns, but Love and someone's hand guiding ...were all beautiful lines....so was the last para, ....
"Tread carefully
Cause what we have
This treasure
Can never again be found..."

Lovely lovely.....really made my day! Am i happy that i visited IL after a long time.....

Hope you are doing fine .....thanks for being here and i was happy to see all the other inspired poets complimenting you in their style.....so you have become a source of more poetic outpourings!

Dear Dear Pushpaji,

You have put it across very beautifully:))

Yes with the support of the loved one the journey is ever so beautiful:)

Thankyou so very much for gracing this thread with your very auspicious presence Pushpaji, it means a lot to me:)

Love,
Devika

Originally Posted by Pushpavalli Srinivasan

Dear Devika, A nice poem!

Though the path seems to be rough,
It will not be found tough,
If we tread on hand in hand,
till we reach the journey's end!
love,
PS