Expression of feelings......

I started writing poem since I was a teen....but never thought of showing it to anyone....I think it is now or never can I let the world know of my poems........hope you all like it.........

Ever heard of a rose weeping?
It reminds you of the lovely Juliet dying in her beloved Romeo's arms,
Place your ear next to my heart and you'll hear a similar story of my love's untold harmes

Ever saw an angel with broken wings?
It reminds you of two loving hearts becoming one but later separate and break apart,
Touch my trembling veins and you'll feel a similar pain in the dance of my crying heart

Ever noticed an icy figurine bleeding?
It reminds you of a mom crying after the death for her unseen unborn child,
Look straight into my face and you'll find a similar image of my eyes turning red riled

Ever wondered why people in love often cry?
It reminds you of the roses with striking thorns, the divine lovers with misery upon and all those beautiful things which are so scary at times because,
After loving someone with all your heart only will, you know what's it like to get hurt and yet can't stop loving him no matter how he is and what he does........

It hurts a bit , when the person you love doesn't signify your love

It hurts a little, when the person you love loves you for lust
It hurts for some days, when the person you love tries to get rid of
It hurts for few years, when the person you love betrays your trust


It hurts every inch, when the person you love walks out on your face
It hurts even in dreams, when the person you love is not brave to impart
It hurts sweetly, when the person you love, loves you but doesn't embrace
It hurts completely, when the person you love is not near and miles apart

It hurts for an instance, when the person you love, doesn't love you more than infinity
It hurts for a moment, when the person you love, feels you are not his only affinity
It hurts for a while, when the person you love, doesn't think that it's you he ever wished for
It hurts forever, when the person you love does very little and always expect from you more and even more!

dear aparanji
both of your feelings are cent percent true only the person who knows the pain of living and laughing in that pain can understand your feelings..
incidentaly i can ........
it hurts years after also ..and will for life long .. only if hurt was not so harsh ...........

Apranji,

I don't have words...these are simply great.

hi

i loved ur poem..its really superb!

megha

True expression of feelings..

Liked your poem

Keep them posting

Aparanji,
keep writing..rightly expressed the hurt that love gives..

sriniketan

Dear Aparanji

You have shown your feelings very nicely. Nice poem. Keep it up


love
viji

dear aparanji,
your apt words express your feelings so nicely!!! sure you will get hurt more when that person is so selfish as to expect more from you . nicely penned.
with love
pad