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Old 11th August 2008, 07:34 AM
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Default முதல் கவிதை !!

என் முதல் கவிதை உங்கள் பார்வைக்கு .....



அன்பு என்னும் ஈட்டியால் குத்திவிட்டு
ரணம் ஆறும் முன் பிரிந்து செல்கிறாயே..
இது நியாயமா நண்பனே !!!

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காதலன் நண்பனாக இருந்தால் காதலுக்கு
மரியாதையை !!
நண்பன் காதலனனால் நட்புக்கு என்ன
மரியாதையை !!!
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Old 11th August 2008, 01:35 PM
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Dear Brindha
You ar eproving time and again you are an all round talented person.. If this is your first then I can only imagine the wonders in store for us.. keep writing my friend you rock!
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Old 11th August 2008, 02:32 PM
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Dear Brindha,

Beautiful "words" on the value of friendship. Liked it very much !!

Keep it up, dear !
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Brinda,
wow..is this your first one...no wonder...
Natpukku mariyaadhai..

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Dear Brindha,

Nice starting…

But I couldn’t accept your last line… When your friend becomes your lover… it need not have to degrade the friendship… This is my thinking…. sorry to have a different opinion...

May be or may not be…

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I like this lines

காதலன் நண்பனாக இருந்தால் காதலுக்கு
மரியாதையை !!
நண்பன் காதலனனால் நட்புக்கு என்ன
மரியாதையை !!!


Super !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Dear Brindha
You ar eproving time and again you are an all round talented person.. If this is your first then I can only imagine the wonders in store for us.. keep writing my friend you rock!

Dear Ac Mam...

Thankyou very much for your first FB... This was written 8 years before mam..When i was in my college :)

Thanx a lot for you kind words mam !! I dont know whether I deserve it...
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Dear Brindha,

Beautiful "words" on the value of friendship. Liked it very much !!

Keep it up, dear !
Dear Gowri..

Im very happy that you like my first poem !! thanx a lot for you Fb dear !!
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Brinda,
wow..is this your first one...no wonder...
Natpukku mariyaadhai..

sriniketan
Dear Mam..

Thanx a lot Mam... Still I remeber the wonderfulplace where I wrote this poem eight years back... in my hostel :)
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Dear Brindha,

Nice starting…

But I couldn’t accept your last line… When your friend becomes your lover… it need not have to degrade the friendship… This is my thinking…. sorry to have a different opinion...

May be or may not be…

Veda
Dear Veda Anna.. Long time... How are you..?

Ya you are right..Many friends become lovers no wonder in that !!

When I wrote this poem i was 18 years old just stepped in college after schooling .... So you can understand now.... :) . And after that have learnt many things :)

Thanx Anna !!
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