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I will always love your lies...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Dinny, Aug 12, 2013.

  1. Angellic

    Angellic IL Hall of Fame

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    PD: You r too good yaar...my god such a lovely poem...so touchy but loved it :)
    Kaash me bhi aapke jaise poem likh paathi :(
     
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  2. Dinny

    Dinny IL Hall of Fame

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    PrettyDee

    If theres a goddess of poetry in IL then its you...its you...its you
    :bowdown:

    If you were here i would have given you the tightest CRUSH (hugggs i meant :biggrin2:)
    And this :kiss:
    You are THE BEST!!!
     
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  3. prettydevil

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    Thank you Angel dear !! :)

    am glad you liked it.... how was ur b'day btw...?? and what did you do.. ;-)
     
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    Oh my love,
    you are now making me blush
    I am nothing without you
    all this is is coz of you

    If I am the goddes of poetry in IL,
    then you are my God ;-)
    my poems are incomplete
    unless you read them all :-D
     
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    Fighting with me to bake as planned
    With apron around and spatula in hand
    Puzzled what to do, or where to start
    your naughty eyes look at me, melting my heart

    I try to help you, but you won't listen
    just making me want to, change my decision
    You look at me, and I again fall in your trap
    This time,in my arms, I wrap you around

    You mix the flour with some more water
    I cheat on you and replace the batter
    We put the cake in oven for some time
    watching the timer, you mummble and rhyme

    Ting Tadang, the beep makes a sound
    you run to the oven, and there on it you pound
    I shout at you, coz the oven is hot
    you say, I know momma, I am wearing the gloves you got :)

    We remove the cake, and I see you full of joy
    Shouting with happiness, the sight so wonderful, Oh boy!
    You tell me that we will cut the cake with Daddy,
    but I know you want to taste it now, so badly

    So I tell you, that we will bake again
    When Daddy comes, he will be your chef assitant-main
    You are now jumping with joy, all over the place
    I wish I can capture forever, this innocent face

    With your little hands, you feed me cake
    tears in my eyes, saying wonderfully it is made
    you feel so happy and hug me tighly again
    And I think in my heart, don't know this will happen when

    But I"ll wait, coz I know some day will come
    when I will be the reason, for you to be at home
    Loving, cuddling and hugging me
    and with a naughty smile, calling me mommy!
     
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  6. Dinny

    Dinny IL Hall of Fame

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    Babes your previous post just got nominated ....:)

    Btw we already have a GOD of poetry amongst us....no points for guessing ....its Rgs....

    I am a mere mortal....watching the gods and goddess come and post their beautiful poems on this thread.

    And YES i read each poem line by line.
     
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  7. Dinny

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    Aawww
    pretttyDee that one about cake is just exactly what i felt like the first time i had made a cake for my son.And he was just as excited as the little boy in your poem....
    I loved it prettyDee......muaahhh!!
     
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  8. Angellic

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    I was fasting so it was completely a blessed day for me... I thoroughly enjoyed my day with my students and with my family as well...
     
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    Dinzy dear... thank you so much for nominating it. :kiss

    I was feeling so low after writing that cake-bake poem, but now I feel so happy :)

    Thank you :-D
     
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    awww.... cheer up!!! hugs :-D
     

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