PD: You r too good yaar...my god such a lovely poem...so touchy but loved it Kaash me bhi aapke jaise poem likh paathi
PrettyDee If theres a goddess of poetry in IL then its you...its you...its you :bowdown: If you were here i would have given you the tightest CRUSH (hugggs i meant :biggrin2 And this You are THE BEST!!!
Oh my love, you are now making me blush I am nothing without you all this is is coz of you If I am the goddes of poetry in IL, then you are my God ;-) my poems are incomplete unless you read them all :-D
Fighting with me to bake as planned With apron around and spatula in hand Puzzled what to do, or where to start your naughty eyes look at me, melting my heart I try to help you, but you won't listen just making me want to, change my decision You look at me, and I again fall in your trap This time,in my arms, I wrap you around You mix the flour with some more water I cheat on you and replace the batter We put the cake in oven for some time watching the timer, you mummble and rhyme Ting Tadang, the beep makes a sound you run to the oven, and there on it you pound I shout at you, coz the oven is hot you say, I know momma, I am wearing the gloves you got We remove the cake, and I see you full of joy Shouting with happiness, the sight so wonderful, Oh boy! You tell me that we will cut the cake with Daddy, but I know you want to taste it now, so badly So I tell you, that we will bake again When Daddy comes, he will be your chef assitant-main You are now jumping with joy, all over the place I wish I can capture forever, this innocent face With your little hands, you feed me cake tears in my eyes, saying wonderfully it is made you feel so happy and hug me tighly again And I think in my heart, don't know this will happen when But I"ll wait, coz I know some day will come when I will be the reason, for you to be at home Loving, cuddling and hugging me and with a naughty smile, calling me mommy!
Babes your previous post just got nominated .... Btw we already have a GOD of poetry amongst us....no points for guessing ....its Rgs.... I am a mere mortal....watching the gods and goddess come and post their beautiful poems on this thread. And YES i read each poem line by line.
Aawww pretttyDee that one about cake is just exactly what i felt like the first time i had made a cake for my son.And he was just as excited as the little boy in your poem.... I loved it prettyDee......muaahhh!!
I was fasting so it was completely a blessed day for me... I thoroughly enjoyed my day with my students and with my family as well...
Dinzy dear... thank you so much for nominating it. :kiss I was feeling so low after writing that cake-bake poem, but now I feel so happy Thank you :-D