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Old 13th March 2008, 01:38 PM
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The sight of a baby's smile
The smell of a baby's face
The sound of a baby's cry
I searched there for you MyGod

The sound of birds chirping
The sight of flowers blooming
The smell of rain falling on soil
I searched there for you MyGod

The sound of waves splashing
The smell of the salty breeze
The sight of the huge waves
I searched there for you MyGod

The sight of brids migrating far
The sound of them calling each other
The smell of all creatures far and near
I searched there for you MyGod

The sight of a full moon coming
The sound of puja in the evening
The smell of camphor and incense
I searched there for you MyGod

The sight of not finding you anywhere
The sound of my loud sigh of disappointment
The smell of my tears falling down my cheeks
I searched there for you MyGod

You did not have to look out at the world
You did not have to smell all through the wild
You did not have to hear all the noise out loud
All you had to do was look within and behold!
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Old 13th March 2008, 01:47 PM
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Dear AC ma'am

You are rocking!! Another great piece from an emerging great poet of IL!!...

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Old 13th March 2008, 01:57 PM
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Dear AC,
with sight, smell and sound, you got the message out---seeing the Lord within....to your talent and also for the message....

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Old 13th March 2008, 02:25 PM
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Dear Anandchitra,

I really enjoyed reading it. Very well written.

Regards,

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AC,

Good one yaar. God definitely plays hide and seek. it is upto us to find him within us and in everything he created.
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Dear Akka,

That is real great one, with realisation and message....

Great.... Keep posting more....

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Thanks my young friends..you can tell i feel encouraged by all your words..
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Dear most Chithu sis,

Wonderfully sketched creation !! A creation to make the Almighty proud of his creation !!! :):)

Should I say, here too I will scribble my amateur thoughts ?? But could not resist taking the back seat !! Thank you very much for making me "think" my lovely sis !!!!

"THE CREATOR OF ALL CREATIONS"

The best democrat this world has ever encountered,
An affable source always by our side,
The master engineering structure astounding us,
The basic feature of all strong emotions !!

The personification of righteousness,
The Ultimate truth,
Our reliable most soul mate,
The destiny !!

The dew drops speaks your purity,
The petals speaks your orientation,
The envelopes speaks your striking vividness,
The blossom of a plant speaks your marvel handworks !!

Through an infant's yawn, you rest,
Through a child's play, you score,
Through a butterfly's movement, you move,
Through a bird's dart, you soar high !!

Through the inanimate, you express,
Through the animate, you experience,
Through the limitless blue, you speak,
Through the expanding brown, you teach !!

The "air" around is your permeating nature,
The "water" bodies reveals your extra pure nature,
The "land" widespread stress on your enduring load bearing nature,
The "space" around is your omniscience,
The "fire" lit shows your raging absorption !!

O the mighty Lord,
You have spread your wings so wide
Your spirit enervate our spirits too,
when we bask in your paradise of bliss
making me wonder why?
we still seek you, thinking you hide !!!

Regards with Love
RamyaVaradharajan

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