What do I complain about???

(I know some of my friends here are not good at hindi, and this is my translation of the Shikayat karoon kaise which may not do the beautiful justice for the meanings in exact..and may make my scribblings look more worse...bear with me gals....)

I dont have any cribbings,complaints to you God
What i was destined , I have got everything
You have given me bountiful happiness
I sometimes doubt if i eligible for the same

He has a complaint, that I don't say anything
What do I tell him, I am crippled by my habit,
That I don't know to complain
I have got my best friend as the love of my life
Now what should I do God , Thank you or Complain

The apple of my eyes, the flower in my garden,
When they call me Mom, I am so elated and happy
as if I am the only one to have these joys
I have received this boon as a blessing,
I bow my head in gratitude to you God.

Life is not spring alone, there is droughts amidst,
You have given, me the strength to fight any situation
I have this confidence, that I can lay the flowers of happiness
on the path of my dear and near ones, i have the courage,
To live life, with openness and joy, on my own terms
Now even if I were to complain, what do i complain or crib about
When I know, I have your protection over me God,
I just want to say Thank you my Lord,
The guard and saviour of my World.

Dear Shanthi ma'am

I again (pls you had my quota today..so do not make me bow down once again) for the translation...

But then i would have bowed down thousand times if you had not written these words....(Thank you for saving me from back ache..)

Originally Posted by shanvy

(I know some of my friends here are not good at hindi,

Its now time for me to thank God for giving you a beautiful place on His earth n for making this world a worthy place for all of us to live in!!
Thank you Lord!!!(This bow is not for you...its for my Anjaneya)

Love
Meena

Wonderful Wonderful Wonderful Shanthi..so very glad you shared the English translation here..You are talented in so many many areas ..Keep growing and wishing you all the success your heart desires.

Originally Posted by Meenaneelakantan

Dear Shanthi ma'am

I again (pls you had my quota today..so do not make me bow down once again) for the translation...

But then i would have bowed down thousand times if you had not written these words....(Thank you for saving me from back ache..)



Its now time for me to thank God for giving you a beautiful place on His earth n for making this world a worthy place for all of us to live in!!
Thank you Lord!!!(This bow is not for you...its for my Anjaneya)

Love
Meena

Meena,

You are welcome. had to translate it for my friends here.


Yes me too bow to my God..And you are not supposed to bow to anybody else along with God..(Thank god you saved me...)

Originally Posted by anandchitra

Wonderful Wonderful Wonderful Shanthi..so very glad you shared the English translation here..You are talented in so many many areas ..Keep growing and wishing you all the success your heart desires.

AC dearie,

I was having my doubts about the translation, because the original has few words that cannot be given full justice in english..

Thanks for all your wishes.....

No complains at all, Shanthi.
Nicely expressed feeling through your words..

Keep coming....

sriniketan

Hi Shathi,

Really a beautiful one. Keep it up.

Cheers
Parul

Dear Shanthi,
Beautiful Poem.Words expressed are so good.No complaints about this translation

Dear Shanvy,

Mujhe aapki kavita Shikayat Karoon Kaise ,bahut ki lubavna Laga. Bade Hi naye andaaz se aapne bahut hi anokhi baat kahin.Aapke har Alffaz mein bahut mittas hain.

And your translation has done justice to the same. Lovely thoughts Shanvy,
Reminds us of the need to be satisfied with what we have. A very wonderful saying comes to mind : " I had the blues because I had no shoes ,until upon the street I met a man who had no feet"

Regards,
Devika

Originally Posted by Sriniketan

No complains at all, Shanthi.
Nicely expressed feeling through your words..

Keep coming....

sriniketan

Sriniketan,

thank you. No stopping my scribblings, when i have so much encouragement.