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Old 4th November 2007, 12:23 PM
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I MISS YOU

Lost in the midst of dark clouds,

i can see you through the sky,

dazzling, shining my little star,

i want to get you in my arms.

Is there a way i reach to you,

can i touch you, have a feel of you?

My little star gone so far away,

leaving me to sob all the way.

Come and hug me give me your feel,

how can i live with a pinch in my heart?

You were a ray of light and hope,

i feel my heart and soul has eloped.
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Old 4th November 2007, 08:57 PM
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Very touching poem, nicely expressed! Babyish!

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hi babyish,

Very beautifully expressed..

hope you can hold your little star in your arms all the time...
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Old 5th November 2007, 10:28 AM
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hi Sriniket,

thanks for the response.
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Old 5th November 2007, 10:29 AM
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hi Shanvy,

i wish ur hope come true for me
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HI Bayish,

hmmm, touching to the core...

regards
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hey babyish,

With my whole heart i wish the same..amen.....
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DEAR BABYLISH,
if love is strong ,we all will find our lucky star,surely...the strength is when u believe in it...may almighty help u to keep ur little star closer to ur heart.ur post is very beautiful!!!
keep posting!
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Dear babyish,

Nice poem with excellent words. Keep posting. All the best.

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