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  1. Jun 20, 2011 #1
    Lalitha Shivaguru

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    MISS YOU!​

    Life is not the same anymore
    Months pass into years
    But my yearning for you never cease
    Miss you…..a lot

    ​
    Day begins with a gloom
    As I go about my chores without any glee
    Wish you were there by my side
    Miss you… a lot

    The times we spent holding our hands;
    Hugging & kissing each other
    Bringing in an exciting thrill
    Miss you… a lot

    Time stood still
    When our eyes met
    And words spoken were none
    Miss you…a lot

    As tears engulf my eyes
    Dampening the pillow
    Eyes refusing to meet
    Miss you… a lot

    Mornings fade, giving way to torturing nights
    Missing your warmth and
    The heady perfume next to me
    Miss you …. A lot

    As I listlessly roam about
    in my old worn out dress; hair unkempt,
    Eyes swollen, face devoid of any makeup
    Miss you….a lot

    Where are you my dear, what made you forget me
    These questions tormenting me and
    Bringing in fresh bout of hot tears
    Miss you….a lot

    Life is not the same without you
    My soul has lost all its color
    And the zeal to live
    Miss you….my Dear
    Miss you… my Friend
    Miss you… my Love
     
    Lalitha Shivaguru, Jun 20, 2011
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  2. Jun 20, 2011 #2
    prana

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    Lalitha,

    I could feel the pain...touchy poem....

    keep up the work!!
     
    prana, Jun 20, 2011
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  3. Jun 20, 2011 #3
    Malar2301

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    Dear Lalitha ji,

    Excellent!!!

    Lines are so magical and it conveys the feel of missing someone so dear...
    I'm carried away by the lines...I can relate those lines to the near ones whom i'm missing them very much....

    Great!! You have started to rock with your verses....:thumbsup

    Waiting to see more from you!! All the best!!
     
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    Lalitha Shivaguru

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    Dear Prana,

    Thanks a lot for being the first to comment... and another big thanks for all the appreciation...
     
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    Lalitha Shivaguru

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    Dear Malar ji,

    Ohhh thanks a lot dear.. I was not sure of these verses at all. I feel so happy to have evoked similar feelings in you.

    Thanks once again dear...it means a lot to me.



     
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    rgsrinivasan

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    Nice one again Lalitha. Thanks for sharing. -rgs
     
    rgsrinivasan, Jun 20, 2011
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    Lalitha Shivaguru

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    Dear Rgs sir,

    Thanks a lot for your comments. It really boosts up my confidence.


     
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    omsrisai

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    Nice and touching one Lalitha ...waiting for more from you...
     
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    Lalitha Shivaguru

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    Thanks a lot Uma. It means a lot to me and motivates me.


     
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    varalotti

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    Dear Lalitha,
    I can almost see you transformed into a poetess. I first thought that you are going to introduce something else as your love. The fact you didn't do that lends some weight to the poem. You have done it, my friend.
    Now start writing more and more. We are all waiting.

    Do you know that seeing your poetry I was inspired to add a few lines in my next episode of The Lovers Park.
    Be a good girl and a gifted poetess and tell me on Thursday whether my poem is good.
    love,
    sridhar
     
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