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Does Your Life Need Some Spice?

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  1. May 8, 2011 #1
    satchitananda

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    A certain dear friend named Ice
    Complained that her life lacked some spice [​IMG]
    I told her "Go see a movie
    Or do something groovy[​IMG]
    I'm sure you'll find that very nice"
    .
    "Or I'm always willing for a chat [​IMG]
    Do you think you'd like to do that?
    Do you find me a bore
    Then pray say no more
    I'd rather know nothing of that"

    Ice said she was going crazy[​IMG]
    I didn't think she was being lazy
    She really had loads of work
    Which she did nothing to shirk
    So I wished to make her life a bit easy.

    Now I suggested "something Italian
    Or maybe something completely European [​IMG]
    It could be a culinary blessing
    With lots of salad dressing,
    Be it vegetarian or non-vegetarian".

    "Or how about a nice new dress [​IMG]
    Shopping's known to reduce stress
    But make sure of the price
    Don't spend thousands in a trice
    Or your balance sheet would be a complete mess".

    "Or how 'bout in the Bahamas a cruise, [​IMG]
    I hope that will certainly amuse,
    A young lady who is bored,
    Of being at work moored,
    For a holiday she now has a ruse".
     
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  2. May 8, 2011 #2
    kAlyaniShAnti

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    [​IMG] Satchi,
    what a cool way to spice up ice's life!
    amazing blend of words, rhythm and visuals!
    Of course, I can not reply in issshtyle!
    I completely admire your performance of great elan!

    [​IMG]
     
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    Re: Does Your Life Needs Some Spice

    Early in the morning but midnight
    when you can think of something bright
    when everyone is in deep sleep
    you had thought of Ice something deep

    Now I know where to go
    when i am a litte low
    You can never be a bore
    because you always teach me more

    How is this Satchi
    hope you like it
     
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    Re: Does Your Life Needs Some Spice

    Very interesting and good to read !!
    Sats......one more feather to your cap !!
     
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    Re: Does Your Life Needs Some Spice

    :thumbsupHi Satchi.....
    You missed my dear
    Icy is our beloved Ilite
    Please tell her tocomehere
    Tell us a story for then her boredom will take to flight

    For in story telling she is a master
    In weaving one she will lose
    herself to it n give us a poser
    which chance we will not like to lose:hide:

    satchi your limerick is awesome:thumbsup
     
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    Re: Does Your Life Needs Some Spice

    Great Satchi.

    I am sure that the poem would be soothing not only for ice
    But for all those whose day is not that nice

    The advice you have given is worldly-wise
    But for which people may think otherwise.

    And finally it gets down to either drink or eat
    Or do something and probably post a tweet

    But I would ask you to go to the street
    And find someone who's not so neat

    Help him with words and deeds so sweet
    That's like giving yourself a treat.

    Sorry, Satchi. Your poem was an inspiration for me.
    A good work
    sridhar
     
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    Re: Does Your Life Needs Some Spice


    Thanks so much Kalyani. Your words never fail to pep me up. :thumbsup
     
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    Re: Does Your Life Needs Some Spice

    That Vijima was terrific
    I must say your writings are prolific
    I do hope you will write
    Some poems nice and light
    That would be an attempt tres magnifique!
     
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    Re: Does Your Life Needs Some Spice

    Thanks Sudha for your feedback as well as for your constant support. :)
     
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    Re: Does Your Life Needs Some Spice

    I have tried Ice here to bring
    I haven't left out a thing
    I know she will be here
    So please have no fears
    Or maybe you could try her to ping.



    Thanks so much VJB.
     
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