There was nothing newer in my life, Same places I went, same faces I met, Yearning for just a change in my life, I met this guy, and my life was lit. For he introduced some things to me, Which brought instant joy in myself. Smoking a stuff was too hard for me, At first, Then I could do it myself. Then I experienced a tiny prick, Which gave me an immense joy. Knowing nothing about the trick, I spent all I had to that ploy. Wanting it more, but having no money, I started to steal from my home. This new habit I practised in many, Neighbours and dear friends' home. I was pale and always looking tired, My parents sensed something wrong. We all had to face our doctors ire, Who whacked us with words so long. I was hospitalized the next day, And found two people to watch. I thought I would soon go astray, Without, so I tried to dodge. It didn't help and I felt worse. And they had to give me a dose, Of that poison to make me sit, Oh! I felt like a piece of **it. One of those was a person I know, Who played along with me before. While he looked clean as pure snow, I never felt this cheap before. Each day seemed like years, And once I could not bear, All these, so I tried, And I had almost died. When I just opened my eyes, This guy stood before me, Slapped me hard that my eyes, Welled and I could not see. You want to die, you fool? Go ahead, drink this now! Rarely does he lose his cool, I made him do! I bowed! All the efforts that you make, Should only be for your living. Don't do this for God's sake! There is no gloy in leaving! These were what I heard him say. I never gave up from then on. Soon came the end to my long stay, I went home and felt reborn. Drugs may give an instant kick, But rob your life from you. Stay away from it and kick Those who try to force you. -rgs
Dear Sri, This is a virtuous poem. I feel that any poem, prose, folder, flier, capton, thought, emotion directed against drug abuse, is part of the greater fight aginst drugs, peddlers, and the whole mob profitting by such trade. Let us just say a prayer to Hanumar, Swami LakshmiNarsimhar that very soon drugs depart from this world. PS: Your poem on Neelakandar- the Neelakandaswamy temple is a place where drug addiction is cured by the Grace of Shivan, drinking a special potion prasadam.
Dear Vidya, Very glad to get first feedback from you, that too, on a positive note. And yes, the information about Neelakanda Swamy's prasadham is a news to me. Nice to receive such feedbacks from you. Hope I write well to get such deserving feedbacks. -rgs
Thanks for your fast feedback Premalatha. Drugs should not be entertained at any cost. As they say, bad habit enters like a guest and drives our goodness out! -rgs
Rgs, Your title reminded me of T-shirts, which were distributed in my children's elementary school, with the caption.."Say NO to drugs!" It is a pathetic news to hear, when one falls for this vice like any other vices in the world. Vidya, that's is a good piece of information. sriniketan
Rg An eye-opener lines. Staying away from Drugs means keeping away our mind and body CLEAN. [FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]A smarter way to drive out this BUG. [/FONT]When your lungs turn black, they never turn back. When your mind has gone, you know it was wrong. You'll never see what real life can be. I have once read about this Say D.A.R.E!!!!! [FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]D- is for "Drugs" they are very bad, A- is for " Awareness" is what you need to know, R- is for " Resistance" u have to stay away, E- is for "Education" it is what they are trying THANKS for this tippy toes poem Rg. [/FONT]
Concisely written feedback Saroj. The content is too good and your intent well reflected. Thanks.-rgs
Excellent poem Srinivasan. what happens when you get addicted to drugs and how the family suffers becoz of the drug addicted person and how the family supported him/her and got them back to they life alll in one poem was just beautifully penned.......