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  1. falgunid18

    falgunid18 Platinum IL'ite

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    Like every other girl, I dreamed of a wonderful married life,
    Like every other fairy tale, I thought life would be full of beautiful surprise

    Like every other girl friend, I thought my boy friend is the best,
    Like every other fiance I thought my to be groom loves in a zest

    Like every other lover I thought my love will never vanish,
    Like every other relataion I thought mine would be like a sweet danish

    Like every other bride, I thought my marriage day will be the most memorable,
    Like every other newly wed, thought my new mom's home will be more preferable

    Like every other wife, I thought my husband would keep me as a princess,
    Like every other life, I thought my husband's future was my invest

    Like every other wish, I thought my black has turned white,
    Like every other dish I thought my gesture would add more flavour to every bite

    Like every other heart I thought my nights were full of summer,
    Like every other start I thought my bright days will never get over

    But...

    Never did I knew there is nothing like alike,
    never did I knew mydreams would be crushed under his phsyc

    Never did I knew that life is a highway,
    twist and turns and tolls like walking on an invisible skyway

    Never did I knew that pain can break my heart,
    never did I knew that drain is only that I can get

    never did I knew I can not get what I loose,
    never did I knew I haveno rights to choose

    never did I knew forgetting is so hard,
    never did I knew that my happiness would be barred

    Never did I knew that deserving is measurable,
    never did I knew that life is not stable

    never did I knew it will be difficult to be together,
    never did Iknew we will need reasons to love rather

    Never did I knew that hurt will grow inside us,
    never did I knew that tears will be always there beside us


    But now I know ...

    it is time to move to next chapter,
    more than a wife, I have to be a captor

    it is time to not regret the history,
    but plan for a wonderful victory

    it is time to let go of the grudges
    and concetrate on building unbreakable bridges

    it is time to board the sailing ship,
    be prepared for the waves and sands than can sink your wish

    it is time to take two steps ahead
    and never let your fears shed

    it is time to make life better,
    if not perfect then may be a go getter

    it is time to worth your own pride,
    papmper yourself and begin life like a new bride.






    :thankyou2: for reading
     
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  2. insha

    insha Gold IL'ite

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    Hey Falguni.nice one..Not sure if you could write so well previously.See experiences in life has brought another dimension of yours..And yess as you said we cannot imagine being happy always cos we are going to live in the real world..Anyway make the best opportunity of living in whatever situation you are..Life is more about living the present rather than thinking about the past or dreaming about the future...Iam also speaking all this with my experiences..
     
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    eandian IL Hall of Fame

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    Good one falgunid. Somebody is growing up and understanding life. :clap
     
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    Anikha Silver IL'ite

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    hey girl , just to remind you,

    when the caterpillar thought the world was over , it became a butterfly ...
     
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    apaasn Gold IL'ite

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    I rushed to read the 'but' part of the poem :) that was more interesting!
    Good job! Very true poem!
     
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    flowerlady IL Hall of Fame

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    Send the poem to some magazine for publishing, its so good!
    Way to go !:cheers
     
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    bhuvnidhi IL Hall of Fame

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    Wow,Falguni!Such a nice ,level headed poem.Excellent!
     
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    Pallavi4me Platinum IL'ite

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    Falguni...

    A heartfelt write up. It is soooo good dear. poured out your emotions so well.

    You got good skill. Liked it so much.
     
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    ohara Gold IL'ite

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    Falguni,
    You have awaken and risen. That's great news and the poem was too good. Keep it up :)
     
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    AariShrinivas New IL'ite

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    Falguni... Its really a good one. I am thinking how the male version will be. This is my first comment in IL. I felt little embarrassed to post this as all the comments were posted by women.

    Any way your poem is a good one. Try to get it published in a magazine :)
     
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