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Old 14th July 2008, 06:49 AM
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Dear AC,

A story right from my life......when my daughter left home 3 years ago, i was waiting for her to come home every weekend. Of course it was like you had written, all about her new life! Now after 3 years i have got used and i have realised the same as Mythili.....that whatever and however far she goes, we as parents will have to be the fulcrum( i hope that is the right word choice!)

I now know what to expect when she gets married.....so i will be better prepared than Mythili. ha ha.....But good story line and well conceived plot and well narrated with all the right emotions and feelings!
dear BQ
Even when we know and can be prepared.. we would still feel it I think... since you are a little ahead of me you can help me get prepared!
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Old 14th July 2008, 04:11 PM
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Dear anandchitra,
That was a ice story,something that happens to evey mother.You have captured the mother;s feelings so beautifully.I liked srinivasan's quiet observation of everything that happens.arund him.
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Old 14th July 2008, 04:20 PM
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Thank you dear friend mottu
I feel honored by your stepping inhere! Also nice of you to appeciate the mothers feelings.. which is what I wanted to convey!
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Dear AC ,
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Without even realizing it, Mythili’s hands started to stoke her daughter’s head. She looked up to see Srinivasan had come to stand behind them and kept his hands on her shoulder. There was no need for any words to be said. She felt her heart filled with love and now very much at ease. She knew they were, and always would be, for now and forever in the center of her daughter’s life and world. ‘
- these lines brought tears in my eyes . What you ‘ve said is 100% correct . If our children unfold their hearts , we ‘ll surely be there & is that not more than enough for us ? And we , the parents should try to treat joy ( union ) & sorrow ( separation ) alike , having only positive attitude .
Nice story - well said , AC . Thanks for giving us a nice message !
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Hi AC,

You have a way with narration and can churn out good stories. You have once again proved you are stupendous.
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Dear AC ,
- these lines brought tears in my eyes . What you ‘ve said is 100% correct . If our children unfold their hearts , we ‘ll surely be there & is that not more than enough for us ? And we , the parents should try to treat joy ( union ) & sorrow ( separation ) alike , having only positive attitude .
Nice story - well said , AC . Thanks for giving us a nice message !
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Indhu.
Indhu dear
Whenever you step in to reply.. I feel elated and truly glad .. I am sure the mother in you accepted my words .. Thanks for the kind words!
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Hi AC,

You have a way with narration and can churn out good stories. You have once again proved you are stupendous.
My friend
Thank you so much.. I think that feeling and the bond a mother creates is so unique.. to being a woman.. I am sure father also expects to see the child coming home.. but with the mother there are so many more emotions.. that makes the difference! and well worth it too!
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