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Old 3rd July 2008, 09:03 AM
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My dearest Lovable Chithu sis,

My heart felt regards for the analysis and interospection that has gone deep into your heart and that has pierced many hearts here too !!

"Mother" is the greatest miracle the Supreme had ever created, according to my knowledge. Mother of all different flora and fauna too take the highest position in this Cosmos. She bears so many difficulties just to see her gene fly high in the horizon of life. The most amazing expression in all her thoughts, words and deeds is that she takes both the positive as well as the negative end in a neutral manner, keeping in mind, our Well being. There is no second aim for her.

Chithu sis, rather than Anjali's role, I would love to point out her mother's role here in my feedback. The reason behind is very much in your own narration. Yes, mothers of all range and classes, meaning, from different background, bear the same foetus and they have high hopes for the "yet to be born". They grow the child within them by providing their own blood and nutrition. They talk with the child, impart good values and character right from day one thinking that it will have an impact in the child during the stages of development !!! The same was done to "Abhimanyu; Arjuna's son in Mahabharata" and we know the outcome. Though the twist was heart aching, I just want to pin point on a mother's role.

Anjali's mother had passed on all her qualities to Anjali. With no support from anyone in family and with the society shunning their faces from such people; Anjali's mother had done justice for her creation and Anjali too had " Paid (read PAY) RENT = PARENT " to her mom as the Supreme always stresses that its the best way to make our parents proud !!!!!

You had stimulated the cascade of Adrenaline in me Chithu sis !!!

Regards with Lots of Love
RamyaVaradharajan
Ramya mylove
I am in heaven reading your kind words.. what else can I ask for.. Since you know the poets you can relate more to the poignant words of these great poets.
These lines..
துச்ச்மாக வெண்ணிநம்மை தூறுசெய்த பொதினும்
அச்ச்மில்லை யச்சமில்லை அச்ச்மனெப தில்லையே

would even give hope to any destitute.. What a noble soul was he!
again..
இச்சைகொண்ட பொருளெலாம் இழந்துவிட்ட பொதினும்
அச்ச்மில்லை யச்சமில்லை அச்ச்மனெப தில்லையே

again
Where the clear stream of reason has not lost its way
Into the dreary desert sand of dead habit
Where the mind is led forward by thee

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Our we not a proud nation to have born these great souls as poets.. who with their inspiring words have saved many a life.. from despair.. from loss.. from depressions.. even from death.
Like you, my admiration is to the Mother. Even today when I hear so much about teen pregnancies, I can only imagine the torment the girl has to go through.. most of the time alone.
The mother tries to infuse hope, love and courage to her child with dreams that the child might one day make it through life with her head held high.
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Ac Sweety,

The poems were definite motivation for all soul. You are a real sweetheart.

I am not being kind, I am just honest, your potentials are ripping through the roof of your house and reaching us.

Keep writing, it is IN YOU.
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Dear AC madam,

A beautiful story narrated nicely. The poems by Bharathiyar and Rabindranath Tagore are my favourotes too. You have nicely brought the poems in the story and waht you have described are real life happenings. Thanks for an excellent story.

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Thank You dear Geetha... somehow I missed replying to you.. sorry.
Glad you enjoyed my story:)
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