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Old 12th September 2007, 12:22 AM
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Wink Galaxy - Dustbin- Water Bottle...Contest for Writers in IL

THis is a contest for writers of IL. Write your own short (very) stories connecting 3 words: Water bottle, galaxy and dustbin.
Here's mine:

Bhayya was such an animal. She had carefully hidden her box of Galaxy, which Chachu had gifted her, but somehow His Snoopiness had ferreted it out of her hiding place and emptied it. She had not even tasted one. And he knew they were her favourite chocolates. In rage, she took his Armani glasses, wrapped it in a wad of kitchen towel and placed it carefully inside an old water bottle. She first thought she’d throw it into the depth of the dustbin in the kitchen. Then she thought she’d bury it in the huge potted plant, the one her father so lovingly nurtured…No, she told herself, next time he worked on the soil, he’d find it. Justice must fit the crime, she thought. She looked out of the window. The Pizza Hut van had just parked and the delivery boy came out carrying two boxes. She quickly took the water bottle and slipped out of the flat. She gently wedged the plastic bottle under the left rear tyre of the van. Quickly she ran up and watched as the driver reversed the vehicle, crushing the water bottle with her Bhayya’s glasses in it. Serves him right, she thought. Revenge was as sweet as the taste of the uneaten galaxies.

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Old 12th September 2007, 12:37 AM
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WATER BOTTLE GALAXY AND DUSTBIN…

Armaan was never in the habit of drinking or smoking but his fascination was the colorful galaxy which he had all freezed in his telescope installed on the terrace the wonderful stars interacted to him in their own glow and fascination, some times he felt the shooting stars were like a baraath coming his way and sometime the glow of the moon passing through the sky spreading a velvety darkness for all those studded friends of his to line up in decoration.

Vikram his close friend also shared his enthusiasm for the skies, and often spent nights with him both writing down and searching the zodiac signs , milky way and shared a very beautiful rapport on a subject after their heart.

Sharad vikram’s brother was not allowed to go in as he was making more a nuisance to the lot by bringing in drinks and eats and spreading it all over, so one day he mixed cococola and rum and filled it for vikram to share it with Armaan in the night, once the friends started sharing, Armaan felt something uneasy down his throat, he stopped vikram from taking anymore of the liquid, both threw the bottle into the dustbin to go get themselves a wonderful real sealed coke to enjoy their night together with the same passion…..sunkan

what say viju, await ur feed back on this..sunkan
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Old 12th September 2007, 12:40 AM
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Hahaha Sunkan.... Well done! That was quick and good! Any more takers? Come on Ilites... give it a try! The three words are... GALAXY, WATER BOTTLE and DUSTBIN...
Connect them in a story as short as possible...
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Old 12th September 2007, 12:42 AM
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Hahaha Sunkan.... Well done! That was quick and good! Any more takers? Come on Ilites... give it a try! The three words are... GALAXY, WATER BOTTLE and DUSTBIN...
Connect them in a story as short as possible...
for that viju,
change the title to galaxy water bottle and dustbin the contest for writers...sunkan
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Old 12th September 2007, 03:15 AM
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hi sunkan and twinsmom,

Let me try..
No..no...i should not touch it was what i was trying to tell myself.the galaxy chocalate brought home by brother in law on his recent visit from germany was a real temptation. How will i be able to reduce my weight.

Coming back from my walk this morning,. the moment i open the fridge to take out the water bottle, there again the temptation the devil ' what if i just take a bite out of it. Shanthi, the angel in me said, common you cannot lose control.. so just picked the chocalate bar and threw it into the dustbin and picked up the cool bottle of water..

ahh....the cool water sliding down my throat is a sweet victory over my fight against my weight.
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Great Going Shanvy! Wonderful!
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thank you.. this is first after my school days attempting something..

Your immediate feedback has made me happy.
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Hi twinsmom,
Let me try.
Galaxy..... the very word that made me see stars. Alas.....my weight and other such nagging factors would not let me touch it. That the bane of being plump I cursed myself. Temptation the mother of all desires got beetter of me as I watchfully slid one down my throat and wiped my mouth with a sip from the water bottle..... lest I get caught.
The dustbin which was to be emptied had a final visitor in the Galaxy wrap.
Ohhhhhh for its taste again........mmmmmmmmmmmm Divine!!!!!!!!!!
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hi sunkan and twinsmom,

Let me try..
No..no...i should not touch it was what i was trying to tell myself.the galaxy chocalate brought home by brother in law on his recent visit from germany was a real temptation. How will i be able to reduce my weight.

Coming back from my walk this morning,. the moment i open the fridge to take out the water bottle, there again the temptation the devil ' what if i just take a bite out of it. Shanthi, the angel in me said, common you cannot lose control.. so just picked the chocalate bar and threw it into the dustbin and picked up the cool bottle of water..

ahh....the cool water sliding down my throat is a sweet victory over my fight against my weight.
Hi TM / Shan,

Oh my my...... What a horrible day with meetings going on forever... Whatever we discuss on the price increase of the water bottles, unless it is implemented it is not going to improve the profitability..... Finding the parking is nowadays becoming a big problem... Should talk to the caretaker about it. What is happening all the people coming to the Galaxy travels park in front of the building and occupy the space.

Hi Shan I am back home!!.. Can I have a cup of coffee pls... Hey what is there in the Dust bin..... Why did you put the choclate here.... comeon yaar srivats would have atleast enjoyed it.....Though you dont want me to have it.....

What stupidity!! Galaxy Choclate in Dustbin.... Neither for her nor for me nor for my son... What a waste.....All in the name of Weight Control... First these people should learn waste control....

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Hi TM / Shan,

Oh my my...... What a horrible day with meetings going on forever... Whatever we discuss on the price increase of the water bottles, unless it is implemented it is not going to improve the profitability..... Finding the parking is nowadays becoming a big problem... Should talk to the caretaker about it. What is happening all the people coming to the Galaxy travels park in front of the building and occupy the space.

Hi Shan I am back home!!.. Can I have a cup of coffee pls... Hey what is there in the Dust bin..... Why did you put the choclate here.... comeon yaar srivats would have atleast enjoyed it.....Though you dont want me to have it.....

What stupidity!! Galaxy Choclate in Dustbin.... Neither for her nor for me nor for my son... What a waste.....All in the name of Weight Control... First these people should learn waste control....

Veda
DEAR VEDA,
GREAT PA, U HIT THE NAIL DAMN GOOD KEEP IT UP...SUNKAN
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