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The painter par excellence

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Malathijagan, May 28, 2007.

  1. Malathijagan

    Malathijagan Silver IL'ite

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    The painter par excellence


    World's greatest painter,
    He took up his brush,
    made sky his canvas
    and splashed it with colours.

    Colours that make one go crazy,
    yet to Him it seemed so easy!
    A dash of red and a jab of grey,
    a sprinkle of yellow and an orange spray.

    And now for the graphics, animation and sound
    to create a 3-d effect all around!
    He waved His wand and lo, presto!
    The painter at work, I watched spell-bound.

    Quietly He vanished, His work complete.
    A petty mortal, I watch baffled.
    No computer, no power-point, He has with Him I see.
    And yet He could create a magnificent sight!

    The world awakens to the sound effect
    of birds and beasts at their very best.
    The rising sun makes animation perfect.
     
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  2. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    i love his sunsets the best,wish he could come down to teach us a few...very nice keep it up...regards sunkan
     
  3. chitrajan

    chitrajan Bronze IL'ite

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    Malathi,

    I have no words but to say that wish I could write like you

    Very nice
     
  4. Malathijagan

    Malathijagan Silver IL'ite

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    Thank you Chitra, for the compliments. I believe everybody has multiple in-built talents. But we make the choices of what we want to pursue. Though I have a lot many talents to tap, I have concentrated on poetry writing and service. Amidst my routine jobs, that was what I could give my time for . May be in the future I would like to try on my other latent talents.
    I am sure you too must be good at poetry if you put your heart and soul into it. Why dont you try one for my sake and post it in this site! Eagerly waiting for the post.If you have starting trouble, I shall give you a topic to write on- "birth day"
    to start with.
    Regards
     
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    sujathae Senior IL'ite

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    Dear Malathi, Lovely Poem! Explaining the Excellence of the great creator GOD. Noone can compete with that greatest creator. Excellent work keep it up. U r gifted.
    thanks and regards,
    sujatha
     
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    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear Malathijagan,

    Nice poem. You have great imagination and I wish I could write like you by just looking at nature. It is a great gift and keep it up.

    Regards,

    TDU
     
  7. Malathijagan

    Malathijagan Silver IL'ite

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    Thank you tamil and Sujatha for the apprecation for this poem. Tamil, you too write wonderful poems and I love reading them.
     
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    slp807 Bronze IL'ite

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    Hey Malathi,

    what a wonderful poem about the creator,
    u r so talented.
    i wish to see many more from you.

    cheers
    sreelatha
     
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