My Valentine Day poem-Scientific Marvel

This is my original poem.

Since the day we first met
you make me look for you
again and again like a chain reaction
so, you have nuclear energy

Without uttering a sound
your eyes speak thousand words
so, you have ultrasound energy

The sparkle in your eyes
reach me even when I am far
so, you have laser energy

When you smile at me
you make me fall at your feet
so, you have gravitational force

when you just see me
you make my heart beats to race
so, you have magnetic force

when you leave me
you leave behind in me
great vacuum like in space

Oh, Indian woman!
you are a scientific marvel
without you I am just gravel

hello


wow !! such a lot of energy and force....

if we could just gather
all this energy and force
we could light up a few places
send a few rockets..
run a few trains
pump sweet water all round
cook a nice dinner
with love all the way

or atleast keep hearts warm.......

no science this ..!!

sathya

Hi,

That was a great scientific poem ....wow , so much energy and force.....i did not realise that!
Enjoyed it Tamildownunder!


Sathya,
Your rejoinder on that was also too good! You really have a way with words, writing them in verses....wow....keep it up, gal!

TamilDownunder,

That was good,mate! Happy Valentines Day! Love has the potential to make you a better person, so it as potential energy as well!

Dear Tamildownunder

That sure was one youthful , energetic cascade of love!

Best wishes
VS

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Dear Sathya

Your poems are the aromatic garnishing enlivening any thread.
Loved that line: "or at least keep hearts warm".

Best Wishes
VS

Dear Tamildownunder

Poetic marvel with full of energies and forces. Keep it up. Do post some more.

Regards
Varudhini

Dear Tamildownunder

Poetic marvel with full of energies and forces. Keep it up. Do post some more.

Regards
Varudhini

Dear Tamildownunder...

You sure are an odist, a modern one at that, nice lines.
Yes, Indian women are all that and more, they are electrifying...one cannot step on the line:)

Satya, your verse was very good too, keep them coming.

L, Kamla

Thank you all for your appreciation. Indian woman has inspired me to write this poem for Valentine's Day. Have a wonderful Valentine's Day.

Satya, your lines are excellent.