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13th August 2008, 11:11 PM
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 हम है पंची एक डाल की हम पन्छी है एक डालकी बोली है हमारी भिन्न भिन्न बनध है हम सब प्यार की डोरी से हम पन्छी है एक डाल की! सभ्यता है हमारी बहुत पुरानी सदियों से करते इस की पालन और करते रहेंगे युगांतर थक हम पन्छी है एक डाल की! हम है भारत की नारियाँ अनोखि रहती है धुनियाँ की कोने कोने मे भेद भाव तो नहीं हम मे हम पन्छी है एक डाल की! Dear Ilites, This is my first contribution in Hindi. Please bear with me for spelling and grammatical mistakes, as I had lost touch with the language since a long time. Love, PS
__________________ It is better to wear out than to rust out. sarve Jano Sukino Bhavanthu. Last edited by Pushpavalli Srinivasan; 14th August 2008 at 04:44 AM. Reason: हम पन्छी है एक डालकी      |
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14th August 2008, 05:54 AM
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| Re: हम है पंची एक डाल की A nice poem for the first attempt. It shows how enterprising you are even at this age.Keep writing more in Hindi too. Love Malathi
__________________ To be, or not to be: that is the question: Whether 'tis nobler in the mind to suffer The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune, Or to take arms against a sea of troubles. |
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14th August 2008, 06:15 AM
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| Re: हम है पंची एक डाल की Dear Madam, Tomorrow is our Independence Day and you posted a very timely poem. Very nice poem. And here...hum sab Bharath ki naariyam ikkatte hokar, bina bedh bhav ki is forum mein har doosre ko haath batathe hain... We are all the children of Mother India. Happy Independence Day!!!
__________________ regards, maithreyi. |
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14th August 2008, 07:01 AM
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| Re: हम है पंची एक डाल की Dear Malathi, Thanks for your encouragement and I feel elated to get appreciation from my beloved daughter. Love, PS
__________________ It is better to wear out than to rust out. sarve Jano Sukino Bhavanthu. |
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14th August 2008, 07:12 AM
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| Re: हम है पंची एक डाल की Dear Maithreyi, Thank you very much and "Hardhik Badhayiyam" to you and all our Ilites on the eve of Independance day! May GOD shower Peace, Prosperity and equality through out our country and all over the world! Jai Hind! With love, PS
__________________ It is better to wear out than to rust out. sarve Jano Sukino Bhavanthu. |
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