முதல் கவிதை !!

Originally Posted by jaisapmm

I like this lines

காதலன் நண்பனாக இருந்தால் காதலுக்கு
மரியாதையை !!
நண்பன் காதலனனால் நட்புக்கு என்ன
மரியாதையை !!!

Super !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reagrds

Dear Jai..

Thnakyou Thankyou Thankyou !!!

Dear Brindha ,
Your first poem itself is a very touching one !

" நண்பன் காதலனானால் நட்புக்கு என்ன
மரியாதை !!!" - that means .. your friend wants to become your lover which you don't like " - am i right ? If so .. your words are acceptable . If not .. i second veda's opinion :"When your friend becomes your lover… it need not have to degrade the friendship… " . Please clarify my doubt , Brindha . Hope you won't mistake me for saying so .
Love ,
Indhu.

Originally Posted by indhusri

Dear Brindha ,
Your first poem itself is a very touching one !

" நண்பன் காதலனானால் நட்புக்கு என்ன
மரியாதை !!!" - that means .. your friend wants to become your lover which you don't like " - am i right ? If so .. your words are acceptable . If not .. i second veda's opinion :"When your friend becomes your lover… it need not have to degrade the friendship… " . Please clarify my doubt , Brindha . Hope you won't mistake me for saying so .
Love ,
Indhu.

Dear Indhu..'

Thankyou very much for your FB...Glad you like my first poem...

Coming to your doubt... Well i wrote this poem when i was 17 or 18 years old.. ie. I Stepped in to college..bu still in school hangover..not that much exposure also .. But in college things were different... I understood that boys could be good friends and also they can fall in love with their friends.. In our gang also, a beautiful friendship turned into a love for my friend ,they are married with two kids now :)

If you ask me now.. i can clearly say If a friend becomes a lover there is no degradation in the friendship... Hope i cleared your doubt my friend... Life has taught me a lot in this 8 yrs :)

You can ask me anything Indhu.. Why should i mistake you dear .. :)

Thanx dear.. Waiting for your next poem !!

Dear Brindha,
Good One....second One Is Super.........

Dear Brindha,

Nice kavithai.

Yeah...at the age of 18, without that much experience you have written those lines...we get more matured as we get more experience and exposure.

Eagerly waiting for more kavithais.

Originally Posted by gsaikripa

Dear Brindha,
Good One....second One Is Super.........

Hi dear !!

Thanx A lot !!

Originally Posted by maithreyi

Dear Brindha,

Nice kavithai.

Yeah...at the age of 18, without that much experience you have written those lines...we get more matured as we get more experience and exposure.

Eagerly waiting for more kavithais.

Dear Mythreyi..

Thanx a ton for your nice FB dear !! Im gald your read my mind :)

When you find time read my other poems here and pen your valubale comment :)
Thankyou !!