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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Sriniketan, Aug 4, 2008.

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  1. Aug 4, 2008 #1
    Sriniketan

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    With your switching on the bright light
    And opening of the (sky) door
    With a thunderous noise..
    You came down like a water-fall
    With lots of gifts to us..
    sometimes your arrival
    brings happiness to many:thankyou2:
    sometimes it is a total disasterDrowning


    Why don't you be a welcoming guest always
    which would make this world
    happy and hunger-free
    .
    Will you consider this petition......RAIN?

    sriniketan
     
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  2. Aug 4, 2008 #2
    indhusri

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    Dear Sri ,
    Lovely poem ! :clap Very apt for the present situation ! May God give ear to your petition , grant it & turn this world to be a heaven-like place ! Kudos to your noble thoughts , sri !
    Love ,
    Indhu.
     
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  3. Aug 4, 2008 #3
    Anandchitra

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    Just replied to the tamil version and was thinking I will request you for the english version.. because I wanted to nominate this for FP and you can only nominate english I think.. very good my friend.
     
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  4. Aug 4, 2008 #4
    latamurali

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    :wow:wow:clap:clap excellent srini, KALAKARuneenga SRINI, no rain in chennai, severe water scarcity is here now. and people started fighting for water in the road side tap and big queue is there all the time , thatoo jus to have two buckets

    So, may GOD listen to you petition and do the needful
     
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  5. Aug 4, 2008 #5
    Saraswathipv

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    Dear Srini....

    Good one...such a nice thoughtful one...rain only as a welcoming guest:hatsoff

    bye
     
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  6. Aug 4, 2008 #6
    Shanvy

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    Sriniketan,

    As a chennaivaasi, willing to hear the music of rain lashing at my roof than the pinch of water scarcity that is ruling my time table right now.

    good one dear.
     
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  7. Aug 4, 2008 #7
    Kamla

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    Dear Sriniketan,

    Rain is magical, it is commonly associated with romance. But when it gets angry, it can be destructive too.
    You brought it all out beautifully in few short lines in this lovely poem.
    Rain did make a poetess of you?:)
    Congrats on making it to the FP!

    L, Kamla
     
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    aproop

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    Dear Sriniketan,

    beautifully composed poem. hope your petition is considered...

    love,
    Anu
     
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    Sriniketan

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    Indhu,
    Thanks for your first fb here...hope you enjoyed it as the same as the tamil version of it..crossing our fingers..for the petition to be heard..

    sriniketan
     
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    Sriniketan

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    AC,
    Thanks a lot for nominating my 'poem'..it is so nice of you...:bowdown

    sriniketan
     
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