Pain of concealed love

"PAIN OF CONCEALED LOVE"

Everyday in one corner of the world
one corner of the heart.. Love gets
buried deep in its grave and the paining
waft still alive on face filling the eyes..
Letters and gifts stood as silent
inscriptions cant be read by everyone But
known only for two or unfortunate at times..
the Only one whose love has been untold and never be..

Knock the blankets and pillows would shed
stories of tears on short and long nights..
Oh! the forbidden truth to the home but a
fortune to the heart lingering about and
lament in papers and rattle with the walls..
With the doors shut..

Helpless soul with enless untold Love
Give and take virtual Roses.. Make virtual meets
Live fully while dreaming and perfunctory in real life..
When will I end up playing a tangible game
known only to my soul and shall get rid of this
melancholy once for all..
Will I be?..

Luv
Lakshmi

Dear Lakshmi,

A very emotional poem....Your lines are very true ...the pain of concealed love is very worse....

Very nicely written..
Thanx for sharing dear....

Dear Brindha

Thank your for your encouraging fb dear.. This is a poetry felt truly and written on a foggy evening by me 5 years back..

Thanks a lot

Luv
Lakshmi

Originally Posted by brindhak

Dear Lakshmi,

A very emotional poem....Your lines are very true ...the pain of concealed love is very worse....

Very nicely written..
Thanx for sharing dear....

Hi Lakshmi,

You have just portrayed the deepest feelings of one soul apart from the loved one....it really hurts when its not shared and even when its shared, if the same feeling is not reciprocrated...it only adds to ones sorrow.

Good one and expecting more.

Poornima.

have to say...for some time while reading the poem i was totally involved and felt the pain...really a good good one..