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The Beauty Of ENCOURAGEMENT....

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by brindhak, May 31, 2008.

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  1. May 31, 2008 #1
    brindhak

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    Dear friends....
    I just thought to pen a small poem..for the Great and Loving hearts in IL who never become tired in encouraging other IL's... Im not a good at poems... Please bear if any mistakes......


    One Word From The Bottom Of Your Heart..
    Keeps All The Pain Apart.....

    One Line From Your Lovable Pen..
    Builds the boosting Steps To Win.......

    The Warming Words....
    Like A Melody From String...
    Makes Me To Fly Without Wing....

    All The Hidden Talents....
    Like the Invisible Drop in Clouds...
    Pour As Showering Rain...
    When Charged by your Cracking Words...

    Whenever My Pen Becomes Unstable....
    The Power Is Back Because Of You People....

    You Not Only Leave Your Words in Air..
    Also the Essesnce Of Love and Tenderness Of Care...

    Which Brings Charm and Happiness..
    That Never Ever, Ever ENDS..........

    Thankyou All....Bow



    Love
    Brindha....
     
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  2. May 31, 2008 #2
    Arunarc

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    Hi Brindha
    Wow great wordings dear don;t you thing that is the charm of IL.
    People like me keep encourageing so the talented people like you will come out with such beautiful piece for us to enjoy them.
    Nice to see your hidden talent in the form of such wonderful poems. Even some of your articles are really good. Keep coming more of such wonderful poems.
     
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  3. May 31, 2008 #3
    brindhak

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    Dear Aruna....
    Im very happy to see your feedback.... Thankyou very much for your warm and wonderful words.... BowBow

    Surely i;ll try to write more poems.....

    Love
    Brindha...
     
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  4. May 31, 2008 #4
    Jithiks

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    Hi Brindha,

    Wonderful poem...! Very true, IL does encourage all of us and brings our hidden talents. Since we are not criticised or let down..we feel motivated to venture into areas we may not have explored before.

    Especially, I liked these lines....

    Whenever My Pen Becomes Unstable....
    The Power Is Back Because Of You People....

    Keep sharing more of your poems and stories, Brindha.

    Cheers
    Krithika
     
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  5. May 31, 2008 #5
    Devika Menon

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    Wonderful Brindha,

    You have come up with yet another gem of a poem.
    Yes encouragement is all we need to move ahead in life and IL provides that in generous doses, for all here.

    You have penned it very beautifully. Loved it .

    Love,
    Devika
     
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    Sriniketan

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    sure Brinda, we need encouragement to do what we do...that is plenty here in IL...
    Go girl..

    sriniketan
     
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    hasita

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    hey Brindha,

    That's a lovely poem you have penned. It's so true that encouragement makes one give more of themselves.
    Keep writing! Way to go..
    best,
    h
     
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    brindhak

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    Dear Krithika....

    Thankyou for your wonderful words.. I admire all your replies.. you have your own way of writng a feedback.. Im very happy to get good friends like you in IL.. who keeps on Encouraging even a small piece of work....

    Thankyou dear..
    Love
    Brindha...
     
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    brindhak

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    My dear Friend Devika...

    Thanx a lot for your kind and sweet words..... Seeing such a FB from the GREAT poem Writer. makes me so happy.....

    Thanx for your Love and Encouragement..

    Love
    Brindha...
     
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  10. Jun 1, 2008 #10
    BhargaviChakravarthy

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    Dear brindha,
    Simple and wonderful poem.Very true.The warmth and love we shower on others is more than anything else in the world.Your poem is cool and exonerates every one from EGO,hatred,jealousy.A must read by everybody.

    Keep going...
    BC
     
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