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Old 15th May 2008, 07:25 AM
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ஒரு தாயின் கண்ணீர் கடிதம்......

பத்து மாதம் பத்தியம்
இருந்து பெற்றேன்....

நீயே உலகம் ஆனாய்
உயிரும் ஆனாய்....

உன் வாழ்க்கை பிரகாசிக்க .....
நானே மெழுகுவர்த்தியானேன்....


விழி மூட நேரமில்லை,....
உழைப்பிற்கோ காலம் இல்லை....

வலி இல்லா இதயம் இருந்ததில்லை
விதி இல்லா வாழ்க்கையும் இல்லை..

கூட்டை விட்டு பறக்கும் பறவை போல்
நீயும் பறந்துதான் போனாய் பணத்திற்காக....

கடமையை காசோலையில் அனுப்பிவிட்டாய்...
மறந்த பாசமோ மடிக்கப்பட்ட கடிதத்தில் கூட் இல்லை....
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இமைகளும் இதயமும்
கனததிருக்க காத்திருக்கிறேன்.....

ஒருமுறை வந்துவிடு.......
என் கடைசி மூச்சிக்குள்..... !!


Dedicated to A beloved Mother......
Anbudan
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Old 16th May 2008, 08:25 AM
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Hi Brindha

you have brought out the anguish and the anticipation of a mother so well. Please post along a translation in English for all the readers who cannot read Tamil.

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Brinda
Very well expressions.
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Old 16th May 2008, 09:49 PM
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Hi Brindha

you have brought out the anguish and the anticipation of a mother so well. Please post along a translation in English for all the readers who cannot read Tamil.

Love
Dear Usha Mam....
ThanX a lot for your feedback and encouraging words.....
I ll try to translate in english....
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well emoted words....sunkan
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Brinda,
Well expressed the pains of a mother, which is seen as a routine in every household...
as children are away from their parents....

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[quote=brindhak;309982]
கடமையை காசோலையில் அனுப்பிவிட்டாய்...
மறந்த பாசமோ மடிக்கப்பட்ட கடிதத்தில் கூட் இல்லை....
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Hi Brindha,
I am very much impressed by those lines.you expressed a mom's feeling with perfect, touching words.love this poem.congrats.
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Dear Sunkan jiii..

Thankyou Verymuch for your Precious Feedback...
That was really a Agonizing Picture...ThanX for sharing with us...

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Brinda
Very well expressions.
viji
Dear Viji Mam..
ThanX a lot for your feedback...
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Brinda,
Well expressed the pains of a mother, which is seen as a routine in every household...
as children are away from their parents....

sriniketan
Dear Sirini Mam...

Thankyou very much for your kind feedback... (this is my 250 post.. i m glad im replying you... )

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