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Old 14th April 2008, 09:27 AM
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Default Destination.....when?

We all hold our tickets
which are invisible...

even the date, time
and destination, is not visible..

It differs from person to person
still a mystery to all...

It is the ticket
we bring when we were born...

The date, time and destination.
to leave this world
is unknown...

shall we call it a suspense
or a mystery...

It maybe called a suspense
because we don't know when

It maybe called a mystery
because we don't know how...

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Dear Srini,

Well written, Yes birth precedes death and death succeeds life . Both are unpredictable . The ony reality is the present existence. All one can do is live life to the fullest in such a way that when one is no more , one is remembered for the wonderful way the life was conducted.

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Dear Sriniketan
Well written. Life is both a mystry and suspense as we don't know when what is on the way and when...............
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Yes, Devika you are 100% correct..
Thanks for the first response..

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Aruna,
Thanks for the fb.,

Yeah it is full of w's and h's....still struggling to solve it...

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Dear Bhargavi
I absolutely enjoyed what u wrote.. very light and my kind of poem:)
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Thanks AC, for your fb.,glad that you enjoyed it...

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Dear Sri
It is a thriller for we know not where
For a few it is a oneway ticket
But for most a return ticket
But with a difference
We may not come back
To whence we started!
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How true Sriniketan,
We all come with an expiry date and oh, are we not glad that we don't know when it expires!?
Well written Sriniketan, simple and yet profound in thought.
Pondering over the suspense and mystery of it all.

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Cheeniya Sir,
Thanks for your response in which you had showed me that it can be a thriller too...
one- way ticket and return ticket is enjoyable....

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