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7th April 2008, 12:14 AM
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 When you look at me !! WHEN YOU LOOK AT ME When you look at me I wonder if you can see The undying love that I feel in me And then I see your loving smile And I know I am in your mind all the while When you stand by me I wonder if you can feel The way I tremble still, right till my heel And then I watch your dishy grin And I know how manifestly my passions win When you listen to me I wonder if you can still hear Those wonderful whispers that I once blew in your ear As I still feel its just so new Though its been ages since we grew Old together yet our love so firm Still so wonderful what a glorious love term Bathing in old age yet so strong How often does true love come along We’ve both been blessed with ardency What’s age got to do with fervency? I guess someday we shall be known Me for my love for you and you for that look you own When you look at me I’m glad we’ve yet one more day To love and gather together all that we have to say! Love, Devika
__________________ Have the SERENITY to accept the things you cannot change ,the COURAGE to change the things you can and the WISDOM to know the difference !!!! FINEST POST--- MARCH 2008 WINNER. Last edited by Devika Menon; 7th April 2008 at 03:17 AM.      |
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7th April 2008, 12:39 AM
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| Re: When you look at me !! Dear DM, That is a very nice one.... Old together yet our love so firm Still so wonderful what a glorious love term Bathing in old age yet so strong How often does true love come along Great lines... Enjoyed... True love lasts till our end... Veda
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7th April 2008, 03:10 AM
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| Re: When you look at me !! Dear Devika, That was a great poem on being together and ur interpretations onthe LOOK ! I guess only we women can think of all the meanings for the looks They give us.....ha ha! But very cute, ......i guess we do have the ability to look into their souls and understand that LOOK they give us now and then! "When you look at me I’m glad we’ve yet one more day To love and gather together all that we have to say!" Loved these lines! Very good poem...... 
__________________ Love, sudha “Dreams are like stars...you may never touch them, but if you follow them they will lead you to your destiny.”  |
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7th April 2008, 03:23 AM
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| Re: When you look at me !! Dear Devika, This was a beautiful poem.You have penned it so well.Enjoyed every line of it.I guess only you can write such nice/beautiful poem for looks  |
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7th April 2008, 04:41 AM
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| Re: When you look at me !! Dear Veda, Yes true love lasts so long infact even after the lovers are no more. I reminded of the famous song from Jaanbaaz, Har kisiko Nahin milta yahan pyar zindagi mein, khusnaseeb hain woh jinko hain mili yeh bahar zindagi mein Thanks for your comments. Glad you liked the poem! Regards, Devika Quote:
__________________ Have the SERENITY to accept the things you cannot change ,the COURAGE to change the things you can and the WISDOM to know the difference !!!! FINEST POST--- MARCH 2008 WINNER. |
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7th April 2008, 04:43 AM
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| Re: When you look at me !! Dear Sudha, Thankyou so much for writing in! Yes we are more conscious about the LOOK and try to interpret it better. I am so glad you liked the poem. Love, Devika Quote:
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7th April 2008, 04:46 AM
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| Re: When you look at me !! Dear Aishu, From your comments I am almost compelled to start a new line of love called Lookalogy  Thankyou so much for the wonderful words of appreciation. Love, Devika Quote:
__________________ Have the SERENITY to accept the things you cannot change ,the COURAGE to change the things you can and the WISDOM to know the difference !!!! FINEST POST--- MARCH 2008 WINNER. |
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7th April 2008, 04:48 AM
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| Re: When you look at me !! Beautiful poem Devaki....Loved every word of it.. Your poems come straight from the heart....As I said earlier & still maintain, hats off to your Muse.... Regards, Corallux P.S. I was worried I would not get your Darshan today, but you came out like a Full Moon in it's glory with this poem....
__________________ Have a vision not clouded by fear  Corallux Tell a Friend I Tell us about you! I I Visit the ANZAC Forum I Coral's Corner I |
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7th April 2008, 04:48 AM
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| Re: When you look at me !! Dear Devika Wow another good piece from you. What a romantic poem Even though you grow old and fade but your love will always remain young forever. Wow each and every line has so much of meaning into it. Superb..........
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7th April 2008, 04:53 AM
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| Re: When you look at me !! Hello Devika, That was beautiful poem. Truly enjoyed every word of it. You have penned what one can only feel when hearing movie songs... Your choice of words too is great. Meenu Last edited by Meenu Raju; 7th April 2008 at 04:53 AM. |
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