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Old 25th March 2008, 09:01 AM
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A d-i-l’sDiary
(In the hands of the spying m-i-l!)

Life is like a dream!
With dear hubby by my side!
With pink tinted glasses,
Now I view this world!

The things I used to hate,
Are now my fa-vou-rite!
I made all his tastes
That of mine too!

The things I loved most,
I’ve sacrificed for my dear’s sake!
Life sure is rosy
When love is in the air!

Two months have flown by!
With not a count of time!
Days return to normalcy
And the honeymoon is over!

Back to routine of life!
He is back to office,
And so am I too!
Life goes on mundanely!

All of a sudden,
There’s joy in the air!
We’re in celebration mode!
I’m going to be a mom!

Oh, what a joy!
To experience motherhood!
I am a pampered lot!
And I add on weight!

Nine months and a week!
My flesh and blood is here!
A cute and chubby babe!
To keep my soul awake!

Years role by!
Parenting is a thrill!
And tough at times too!
Yet it’s fun and joy!



.........................................


A note by the m-i-l!
One day you’ll be m-i-l too!
Go through my diary dear!
In the attic you’ll find for sure!



Don't take that trouble dear!
I'll give it right here!
History repeats dear!
Tread you my path,you'll sure!

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As stealthy as a cat!
She leaves the room intact!
Waiting for a reaction!
To start a second innings!
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Old 25th March 2008, 09:17 AM
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Hi Malathi,
Beautiful Writeup!!
I agree with you cent percent that 'History repeats'.
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Old 25th March 2008, 09:17 AM
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Dear Malathi,

Hi guess the wait is over. And it was worth the wait. What a stupendous poem. You've taken you through the journey of newly weds to honeymoon to motherhood. Who wouldnt be able to relate to this?. Its a very soulful piece , which is but ofcourse expected from you.
Wonderfully written Malathi. Enjoyed reading!!

Love,
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Malathi,

The wait is over. beautifully expressed. and loved every single stage you have expressed,..and yes loved the mil's diary..

And it reflects the life of almost every DIL's right...way to go my friend..
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Malathi,
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Dear Puni,
Thanks for your appreciation of this poem. This poem is not over yet! There is continuation about which I forgot to mention! That will be as interesting too. I have not decided whether it will be in prose form or poetry! I shall try out both, whichever comes out to my satisfaction will be dedicated to all young women who will in future be m-i-ls!
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This wait is over, Devika! But wait for another one too! Refer to my reply to Puni!And thank you so much for appreciating my poem.
Love and regards,
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Dear Shanthi,
Thank you for responding to my poem so promptly.One more wait follows!Keep watching this space!
Love,
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Thank you Sriniketan! Thank you so much!I am scared whether I will be able to keep up to all your expectations!Any way-"Oralukkulla Thalaiya Vittaachchu!
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Dear Shanthi,
Thank you for responding to my poem so promptly.One more wait follows!Keep watching this space!
Love,
Malathi
Neyar viruppam,

Do post it this week will enjoy , put my fb before leaving for my vacation next week.
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