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Old 7th March 2008, 10:36 AM
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Default Waiting on the threshold

I stood in the threshold
watching God
my eyes and heart
yearned to be near God

So I asked My God
What can I do
so I can always
bw with You

God said to me with kindness
in His eyes, My Child
You have to finish
all your bad karmas
and then come back to ME

How can this be done My God
I asked and wondered
To which He replied with Love
I will send all my angels
to give enough trouble
that you can bless them with love

How would I ever handle
all the problems My God
for I am all alone.
Dear Child He said
I will always be with you my dear
so Never Fear till
you come back and reach me near

When I wake up to see my husband
I know at that moment
God did keep up his word
And is walking with me every step
And for every problem I have to face
I do so with love and kindness
so as to move closer a step to God.
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Old 7th March 2008, 11:08 AM
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Ac Dearie!!

You have come a long way from garage cleaning!!!

Wonderfully penned poem with in depth meaning. .

We can be close to God, if we give the threads of our life to him instead of playing with it. When he flies the kite called 'life' he will save it from being 'cut' at the wrong time. He will pull the kite away to a safer zone and always keep an eye on the kite called 'life'. We humans always like to fly our own kite and call him when its torn and fallen on the floor or call him when its being threatened to be torn or again when we do not know how to fly it anymore.

Good poem sweetheart.
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Dear Anandchitra
That was a beautiful poem
God sending the angels to trouble us in order to complete our karmas and also going to help us to face these problem................super ya really good one.
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AC,

Good one. God knows how much we can tackle..and he also stands behind us to help us if we look like we are going to fall from the pressure....

I always quote this few verses..dont say theinji pona record (don't say i am repeating like a lp that has gone waste from over usage...)

thunbamodu inbam kalandadthey prapanjam.
veyilliye nizhalil inbamum undoh...


along with happiness sorrow is blended in this world.
Unless you are out in the sun, the value of shade is not realised....

Forgot to mention, Good to know the effect of the Gita Classes.
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Shanthi
To see you reply to mine is a true priveledge for me. You have truly made my DAY.
I will not keeyanja record bec thats what i amtoo...

Aruna dear
Thanks for the very kind words.
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Dear AC,

That was so touching......The highlight.......Mention about DH......

I have no words to say...

Would like to quote an example here....In the obituary to writer Sujatha a fan of him wrote....

'Poi vaarungal vadhiyaare, anaithirkkum nandri'....It attracted my DH and me more than anything....As everybody knows everything about him.....your poem speaks itself.....the same way...

I have no words to say....

Love,
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Dear Oviya my young friend
Twice you said you have no words to say. Inspite of that fact you have conveyed more than I could have. I appreciate your kind words and Thank You.
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Dear AC,
Nice poem yaar!
I liked your previous poem too (How selfish can I get).
You are an all rounder!


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Thanks Sindhu. Your encouragement does mean a lot to me.
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AC,
Very nice one reminding us that only after bad karma vanishes, we can near God and for that God will help us and we had to spot Him. It is true.

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