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Old 19th February 2008, 06:40 AM
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Default I Wish I Was Double

I wish , I was two.

My replica goes to school,
when I visit a zoo.
While I watch a zebra
my replica solves algebra!
One plays hide and seek,
the other a computer freak.
One completes homework,
other travel around the world

While one plays throw ball
The other studies all
while one fragile and weak in limbs

Would love the other to be a beauty queen
While one is left with age and plight
Would love the other travel in flight
One is left in loneliness
Would love the other to flirt and be free
as a child so naughty I was
But one side always sulked cried
While the other was bashed and tried
So much to do, so little done.
With out worry , just for once,
let me fly and go away,

Seek the beauty around the world,
as never will I, travel this way!
Let me make this world go wild,
and be happy , as a child.
Wonder, it would ever be true,
I wish I wish, I was two!



INSPIRED BY A FRIEND..SUNKAN
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Dear Sunkan Ma'am

The peom of yours transported me to my childhood. Every child would love to read this peom. wow! loed reading thta bashing part.

Wish I had a clone!

Best wishes
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Sunkan,
Happy to see your 'other' you---through your poems.

True we wish the same.....
Reminded me of the song
'irandu manam vendum..

why can't one of me work at home and other..helping others in needy outside..
why can't one be at home and the other..fly and see the world outside
why can't one be ignorant ( which is bliss, sometimes) and the other be wiser
why can't one be replying this thread and other be reading ..

The list goes on right!

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Dear Sunkan Ma'am

The peom of yours transported me to my childhood. Every child would love to read this peom. wow! loed reading thta bashing part.

Wish I had a clone!

Best wishes
Ansh
dear ansh,
in childhood algebra was a gabra always, i could never calculate with suppose this is x or y or something but yes if they had put it as suppose we calculate the rice bag or oranges also would help but my mind used to be distracted to that x more than the sum so no furthering the matter there. i used to wish had a wizard in maths telling me what to do or someone who is invisible to the world and guiding as no u take this decision and it is good for you kind how wonderful the world would be..sunkan
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Sunkan,
Happy to see your 'other' you---through your poems.

True we wish the same.....
Reminded me of the song
'irandu manam vendum..

why can't one of me work at home and other..helping others in needy outside..
why can't one be at home and the other..fly and see the world outside
why can't one be ignorant ( which is bliss, sometimes) and the other be wiser
why can't one be replying this thread and other be reading ..

The list goes on right!

sriniketan
thanks for joining me gang pal...sunkan
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hello akka

double
inspired
friend who...?
me too
want to be here
and there too...
cook and write too
sing and run too
watch tv and sleep too
old and young too
the list endless...
sure you want a couple
of pages of doubles?


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