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Old 5th December 2007, 04:52 PM
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Default A Poem in Hindi

आरज़ू

जब तुम थे तो कुछ ग़म ना था
हम थे एक बेख़बर परिंदे के तरह
कभी इस कदर तन्हा होके याद करेंगे तुम्हे
सोचा ना था
ज़िंदगी तुम्हारे बिना भी जियेंगे सोचा ना था
आज आलम ये है की तुम्हारा नाम तक याद नही रहता
हम कभी तुम्हारे थे इसका इल्म तक नही रहता
लोंगो के सामने अदाकारी करते करते हक़ीकत ही बन गयी है ये
की ना तुम हो ना तुम्हारी यादें है बस एक धुंधला सा
कोहरा आ जाता है आखों के सामने कभी कभी
और कभी कभी मोह्बब्त के गानो पे आँखों के कोने मैं
कुछ हल्का सा पानी आ जाता है
अक्सर तो सबसे छुपा लेते हैं पैर कभी कभी जैसे
ये दिल बैठ जाता है, तब इससे समझा नही पाते
कुछ इतना बेज़ार हो जाता है की कुछ भी आरज़ू नही करता
एक वक़्त था दिल कीई बेवक़्त आरज़ू से परेशन थे हम
और एक आज का दौर है आरज़ू की कमी से हैरान है हम.
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Kya kavitha he!! Bahuth khoob! Aapki kavitha thodi si dhukh-bari tho he...lekin bahuth achchi he. Aapne khudh likhi he?
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Pyari Riya,
Vaah, vaah !
Bahuth acha tha !
khud likhee aapne?
Aapko meree badaayiyaan !
Pyari
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Thanks Chitra Mam.. And Kalai

Yes I wrote it.
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Wah Ria..

Bahuth Khoob.....
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Ria this is superbly written and thought of Bravo!

Give us more..
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Wow beautiful poem Ria
From the thread came to know you have written this poem Great yaar so we got one more poet here.
Keep writting more and keep sharing..........
Waiting for your next one.............
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Good one! Reminds me of the lyrics 'hame har ghadi aarjoo hai tumhari' from saajan!

Couple of words I did not understand: Ilm, dhoondhlaa - if someone could tell the meaning - thanks!
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its nice one
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Reenae, Arunarc, DudeWithAttitude and Enjoylife.

Thanks for time to read it. It feels great that to know you folks enjoyed it.

Here is meaning of words.
ILM- Awareness,knowledge
DhunDhla - Foggy
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