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Old 25th March 2008, 06:48 AM
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Dear Shanvy,

Kya khoob likha hai tumne. Good keep it up.

जरुरत नहीं पडती, दोस्त की तस्वीर की.
देखो जो आईना तो दोस्त नज़र आते हैं, दोस्ती में..

येह तो बहाना है कि मिल नहीं पाये दोस्तों से आज..
दिल पे हाथ रखते ही एहसास उनके हो जाते हैं, दोस्ती में..

नाम की तो जरूरत हई नहीं पडती इस रिश्ते मे कभी..
पूछे नाम अपना ओर, दोस्तॊं का बताते हैं, दोस्ती में..

कौन केहता है कि दोस्त हो सकते हैं जुदा कभी..
दूर रेह्कर भी दोस्त, बिल्कुल करीब नज़र आते हैं, दोस्ती में..

सिर्फ़ भ्रम हे कि दोस्त होते ह अलग-अलग..
दर्द हो इनको ओर, आंसू उनके आते हैं , दोस्ती में..

माना इश्क है खुदा, प्यार करने वालों के लिये "अभी"
पर हम तो अपना सिर झुकाते हैं, दोस्ती में..

ओर एक ही दवा है गम की दुनिया में क्युकि..
भूल के सारे गम, दोस्तों के साथ मुस्कुरा, दोस्ती में..

Poonam

thank you.

hamare dil jeeth liya hai aapki yeh dosti ka paigam............
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Old 26th March 2008, 01:55 AM
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Hi Shanvy,

Would like to meet u in person.
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: Oh my dear mighty Inspirer !!!

Thank you so much ma'am. My friend and myself had when I first wrote the same and when I understood my mistakes. I had always been shy to talk in Hindi just for my grammatical errors. I love the language and its slang otherwise. I can very well understand if one writes or talks, however native they talk; the difficulty being putting across in simple words and without grammatical errors. Have started to learn slowly and hope will pick up one day :):) for my sheer interest in the National Language !!!! and passion to learn !!! :)

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Ramya dear,

You have really conveyed the meaning. no need of going to so great heights to post. you can post with the grammatical mistakes,,(who cares, my hindi teacher will ofcourse seeing my mistakes after all her drilling and coaching..)

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Ramya Dear
Wow ya nice hindiatleast u tried ur hands on it great girlie
keep going and tell my DIL too................start learning hindiatleast she can read and understand ......................hahahaha
hope she doesn't come here
I know she will not come as from hindi she will be 1000 miles away from it..........



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Dear most Shanthi ma'am,

A well knit poem for a good cause !! Hats off !!!!

Zindagi tho eshwar ne diya,
magar rishte tho hamne hi chaha.
Hamne jo bhi chaha he,
kya jaane samay me kahin, hum ghum naa karen.
Shuddtha aur safaltha he vo jo hame chahiye,
har kadham par.
aur bas thoda sa manushyatha !!
Ye he apni IndusLadies ki sapat.
Zindagi ke saare mod par .....


I did make a few grammatical mistakes when I wrote the same and got it corrected by my close friend :):) Thank you ma'am for I would not have come up with what I did if not for your beautiful poem !!

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Poonam,

You are welcome whenever you come down to chennai. I am honoured.
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Would like to meet u in person.
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: Oh my dear mighty Inspirer !!!

Thank you so much ma'am. My friend and myself had when I first wrote the same and when I understood my mistakes. I had always been shy to talk in Hindi just for my grammatical errors. I love the language and its slang otherwise. I can very well understand if one writes or talks, however native they talk; the difficulty being putting across in simple words and without grammatical errors. Have started to learn slowly and hope will pick up one day :):) for my sheer interest in the National Language !!!! and passion to learn !!! :)

Lots of Love
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RAmya you are welcome. Each language has its flavour. all the best. btw don't embarass me so much...
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Its so much pleasure to be entitled by the Majestic Queen herself

My sweet Aruna ma'am,

Thank you very much for your feedback. Really kind of you !!

well said about my friend.. oh sorry about YOUR DIL ummm... see, we will surely have a discussion about the same tomorrow at college ha ha haha...

Regards with Love
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Ramya Dear
Wow ya nice hindiatleast u tried ur hands on it great girlie
keep going and tell my DIL too................start learning hindiatleast she can read and understand ......................hahahaha
hope she doesn't come here
I know she will not come as from hindi she will be 1000 miles away from it..........
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my dearest Shanthi ma'am..

Its all the fact that comes out ... "Unconditional Love" you see...!!! :):):)

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RAmya you are welcome. Each language has its flavour. all the best. btw don't embarass me so much...

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hi shanthi,

that was wonderful. yes, we need to take care of this relationship without any differences.

anjaane log - anjaane desh - sirf eek hi bandhan - Indian.
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Vanaja,

thank you. I will go one step further and say human being. that is the most important factor today. LEarning to be a good human.
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