Anjaane logon se kabhi

Originally Posted by ChhayaaN

pyari shanthi,
aap ne to hame rooh tak choo liya.kya khubsurti se aap ne apane vicharo to shabd diye hai.kaash mein bhi kuch ayisa leekh pati.bohut see vichar dhara man mein bahethii hai per un sab ko shubdo mein dhal kar ,moti ki teraha piro kar ,mala ke roop mein pesh kar nahi sakati.Aap isi theraha likhti rahein ayhi hamari dua hai.

GOD BLESS YOU
LOVE ,
chhayaa

Pyari chhayaa,

Dhanyavaad. aapney hamari is kavitha kho saraha . Aapke dua key like shukriya.

Dear AC dearie,

thank you thanks for the encouragement

Originally Posted by anandchitra

Really very nice Shanthi..keep it UP :)

Originally Posted by Vysan

Dear Shanthi,

Great.... We got this friendship without meeting or without any expectations.... This hould be preserved and should not be let down due to petty differences....

Veda

Veda,

thank you. and this is a sound advice to all...

hello,

this one is not by me but i would like to share with everyone who has travelled from
one place to another like me

मंज़िलों की खोज में तुमको जो चलता सा लगा
मुझको तो वो ज़िन्दगी भर घर बदलता सा लगा

Cheers,

meera,

Shukriya. kya khoob likah hai kisi ney.

thanks for sharing.

Hi Shanvy,

One more for travellers.....

Ghoomne ki pyaas ho to har manzar achcha lagta hai...

Hum shahar mein itna ghoome ki ab ghar achcha lagta hai.


Isn't it true?

This one is also by some good poet ..... not me.

meera,

thanks for sharing and it is quite true...

Dear most Shanthi ma'am,

A well knit poem for a good cause !! Hats off !!!!

Zindagi tho eshwar ne diya,
magar rishte tho hamne hi chaha.
Hamne jo bhi chaha he,
kya jaane samay me kahin, hum ghum naa karen.
Shuddtha aur safaltha he vo jo hame chahiye,
har kadham par.
aur bas thoda sa manushyatha !!
Ye he apni IndusLadies ki sapat.
Zindagi ke saare mod par .....

I did make a few grammatical mistakes when I wrote the same and got it corrected by my close friend :):) Thank you ma'am for I would not have come up with what I did if not for your beautiful poem !!

Regards with Love
RamyaVaradharajan

Dear Shanvy,

Kya khoob likha hai tumne. Good keep it up.

जरुरत नहीं पडती, दोस्त की तस्वीर की.
देखो जो आईना तो दोस्त नज़र आते हैं, दोस्ती में..

येह तो बहाना है कि मिल नहीं पाये दोस्तों से आज..
दिल पे हाथ रखते ही एहसास उनके हो जाते हैं, दोस्ती में..

नाम की तो जरूरत हई नहीं पडती इस रिश्ते मे कभी..
पूछे नाम अपना ओर, दोस्तॊं का बताते हैं, दोस्ती में..

कौन केहता है कि दोस्त हो सकते हैं जुदा कभी..
दूर रेह्कर भी दोस्त, बिल्कुल करीब नज़र आते हैं, दोस्ती में..

सिर्फ़ भ्रम हे कि दोस्त होते ह अलग-अलग..
दर्द हो इनको ओर, आंसू उनके आते हैं , दोस्ती में..

माना इश्क है खुदा, प्यार करने वालों के लिये "अभी"
पर हम तो अपना सिर झुकाते हैं, दोस्ती में..

ओर एक ही दवा है गम की दुनिया में क्युकि..
भूल के सारे गम, दोस्तों के साथ मुस्कुरा, दोस्ती में..

Originally Posted by RamyaVaradharajan

Dear most Shanthi ma'am,

A well knit poem for a good cause !! Hats off !!!!

Zindagi tho eshwar ne diya,
magar rishte tho hamne hi chaha.
Hamne jo bhi chaha he,
kya jaane samay me kahin, hum ghum naa karen.
Shuddtha aur safaltha he vo jo hame chahiye,
har kadham par.
aur bas thoda sa manushyatha !!
Ye he apni IndusLadies ki sapat.
Zindagi ke saare mod par .....

I did make a few grammatical mistakes when I wrote the same and got it corrected by my close friend :):) Thank you ma'am for I would not have come up with what I did if not for your beautiful poem !!

Regards with Love
RamyaVaradharajan

Ramya dear,

You have really conveyed the meaning. no need of going to so great heights to post. you can post with the grammatical mistakes,,(who cares, my hindi teacher will ofcourse seeing my mistakes after all her drilling and coaching..)