As i walk through my memories

As I walk through my memories,
I see how far I have come…
What all I have gone through…
Is this really me, I am amazed..

The hurts and shocks I survived,
The surprises and lessons I learnt,
The trials and turbulences that
Have taught me more values
And cemented by belief
In love…..

However far I go, I look back
to keep my foot on the ground,
However high I fly, I look down,
To gauge the distance ….
I have come, so returning back
Will never hurt

As I grow older day by day,
I remember the hugs, holding hands,
The smiles and the laughs….
And thank god for giving me a life of love….
Through the loves of my life.


First attempt by me

Dear Shan,

It is really great one...

May god bless you to achieve much much more heights... the loved ones always shower the love...the laughs and smiles always be with you...the hugs and holding hands to stand by you...The turbulances and shocks vanish... the values and beliefs remain and you keep moving forward and no reason to go backwards...

Dear Shanthi
I cant believe that it's your first attempt at writing a poem. It's full of feelings, honesty and truth. I think you should continue your efforts in putting down your thoughts in verse. I wish you all the best!
Sri

Shanthi - that was an amazing poem - your first attempt you say? Simple, soulful, from the heart. Keep them coming!

Dear Shanvy,

I am not able to beleive that this is your first attempt. You have written nice lines. Write more. Wish you all the best.

Regards,

TDU

Originally Posted by Vysan

Dear Shan,

It is really great one...

May god bless you to achieve much much more heights... the loved ones always shower the love...the laughs and smiles always be with you...the hugs and holding hands to stand by you...The turbulances and shocks vanish... the values and beliefs remain and you keep moving forward and no reason to go backwards...

Hi veda,

Thanks ................

Originally Posted by cheeniya

Dear Shanthi
I cant believe that it's your first attempt at writing a poem. It's full of feelings, honesty and truth. I think you should continue your efforts in putting down your thoughts in verse. I wish you all the best!
Sri

Hi sri,

Thanks for peeping in...just tried to write it...thanks once again...will try again

Originally Posted by Shobanag

Shanthi - that was an amazing poem - your first attempt you say? Simple, soulful, from the heart. Keep them coming!

Hi shobana,

I have never attempted poetry sans a few caption writing for the photo contest in chandamama long long back....
Thanks for peeping in......

Originally Posted by Tamildownunder

Dear Shanvy,

I am not able to beleive that this is your first attempt. You have written nice lines. Write more. Wish you all the best.

Regards,

TDU

Hi ramansir,

Thanks for the encouragement. but honestly this is my first attempt...thats why

cant believe this is the first attempt, has so much of ur feelings and emotions. very touchykeep it going