The Kaladeiscopic Drive A Competition Poem
saw through my rear mirror
Waving her hand with a white bright scarf
She looked so sexy and dreamy
I backed my car for her
She asked me a route I didn’t care
just wanted her to share
The air cool interior
with her perfume in air
The smooth ride took a flight
With adrenalin flowing high
I could see her sexy sexy thigh
The light material caressing
Made me ache should I had been
Those life filled yarn
To smoothen her youth heaven
The usual lifeless road
Looked too colorful tonight
What with her presence
Palpitating the heart
Who could she be
Or would she be
Ever be mine
So many love filled thoughts
Racing through my mind,
I turned across to ask her name
And what do I see
She is not the colorful self
Her hair all flowing
But a ghost with teeth
That can suck my life
I had to stop the car
The door wide opened
And she walked across.....sunkan
Total Comments 9
Comments
 |  Nice realisation, before it is too late....very good.. I thought I would see a dracula or something like that... sriniketan |
Posted 1st May 2008 at 10:00 PM by Sriniketan  |
| |  hahah srini, the rest of my friends thought something more erotic and said my a twist in the poem a new dimension..thanks for commenting here pal...sunkan |
| Posted 1st May 2008 at 10:38 PM by sunkan |
| |  Hahaha Sunkan in the beginning thot what a romantic poem from Sunkan......and in the end, it turned out to be vamphire.......... Nice wordings |
| Posted 2nd May 2008 at 03:15 AM by Arunarc |
| |  Haha.. For a minute when i started reading I was thinking - Sunkan! What happened to her?? " :D Watta twist.. |
| Posted 2nd May 2008 at 03:40 AM by sudhanarayanan |
| | thanku aruna,sudha, but hey but what is this u people are underestimating me a lot i do have love poems tomy credit yes but not so erotic |
| Posted 2nd May 2008 at 04:06 AM by sunkan |
| | This is not underestimate Sunkan. but was happy that you are still very very young at heart............The way you have put up that was great. I think at any age having ;ove poem is always great...... keep up your spirit................. |
| Posted 2nd May 2008 at 10:22 AM by Arunarc |
| | thanku aruna, for this compliment i feel elated..sunkan |
| Posted 5th May 2008 at 12:12 PM by sunkan |
| |  wow, sunkan maam, nice one....u began on such a romantic note and gave us a chill in the end....very different one... |
| Posted 6th May 2008 at 04:15 PM by sowparnika |
| | thanku sowpar u enjoyed this end too..sunkan |
| Posted 6th May 2008 at 10:11 PM by sunkan |
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