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Lived Life Through His Whispers Now Through His Eyes

Posted 1st May 2008 at 11:48 AM by sunkan
Updated 1st May 2008 at 11:48 AM by sunkan
My usual lonely walk through the beach

Took a different hue today,
The sea turned blue with all so clear
It looked like a dreamy date.
Felt nature wooing me with a love filled eye

Did I see some planets high
So near and large at sight
The sand I feel so smooth and light
The sun with soothing rays on flight
With a lovely pink shade painted alright

The sparkle of the galaxy so clear and near to me
Are they giving me a message?
Of poignant moment in my life
When love is shining through my eyes
Lived all life through his [dad's]whispers now through his eyes...sunkan


this is the second poem there
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Arunarc's Avatar
Your Second poem is also great Sunkan
walking alone on the beach all alone, always have lovely whispers, the cool breeze blowing, singing into ur ears. I always enjoyed these beautiful walks along the beaches
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Posted 2nd May 2008 at 03:25 AM by Arunarc Arunarc is offline
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yes here this man has walked many a time with his father as he was blind
and now after his father's death for the first time he sees with his father's eyes what all he had described so it is more spl to him..sunkan
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Posted 2nd May 2008 at 08:11 AM by sunkan sunkan is offline
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Dear Sunkan,

It was very touching and the picture as always suits your words so well.

Poornima
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Posted 2nd May 2008 at 08:20 AM by PoorniDaya PoorniDaya is offline
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thanku poornima..sunkan
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Posted 2nd May 2008 at 08:24 AM by sunkan sunkan is offline
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Lived thru whispers, now thru eyes....Awesome

Another aspect - Hardly do we connect to nature so deeply.
For example, I am sure we ll come across so many people who are thinking about the plan for the rest of the day, where to go, what to cook and what to do.

Can we hear what the nature says ? Beautifully portrayed.
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Posted 2nd May 2008 at 02:32 PM by MeenLoch MeenLoch is offline
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yes meenloch
we can only thing is u need to be silent in mind too to recognise their speech this is a competition poem.for the week and the other is the kaleidoscopic drive..sunkan
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Posted 5th May 2008 at 12:14 PM by sunkan sunkan is offline
 
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