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Welcome to my Den! This is where I try to hide at times; be expressive at some other times; be ruthlessly frank at different times and so on.....

I had the habit of writing diaries and thought I would use blog instead. But hey.....I still have to be careful while blogging in a public forum Ok...am trying hard on that!!!

Read on; Post your comments; Good to express, best to share! So support me to give my best !!!

Cheers

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கிடைத்தும் எட்டாத பொக்கிஷம்

Posted 15th July 2008 at 06:57 AM by Jenz
சிலருக்கு கிடைக்காதப் பொக்கிஷம்
எனக்கு கிடைத்தப் பெருமிதம்!
இந்தப் பெருமிதத்தோடு
அடுத்தவர் பார்வைக்கு எட்டாது
நான் உன்னோடு உலாவரும்
கனவுலகம்!
அக்கனவுலகத்தில்
உனக்காக நான் கொண்டிருக்கும்
எதிர்ப்பார்ப்போ ஏராளம்!
அந்த எதிர்ப்பர்ப்புகளின் நடுவே
பிடித்தவைகள் பிடிக்காமல் போயின;
எதிலும் உன் நினைவே மேலோங்கின;
அந்நினைவில் உள்ளமும் உடலும்
வலித்தப் போதிலும் சுகமாயின!
இப்படி
கனவோடும் வலியோடும்
உன்னை காணப் போகும் நாளை
எதிர்நோக்கி இருக்க,
நீயோ என்னைக் காணாது,
என் கனவுகளையும் இருட்டாக்கி
இவ்வுலகிற்கு வராது
என் கர்பப் பையிலேயே இறந்து
கிடைத்தும் எட்டாத போக்கிஷமனதும் ஏனோ?
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Silraukku kidaikkatha pokkisham
Enakku kidattha perumitham!
Intha perumithatthodu
adutthavar paarvaikku ettadu
naan unnodu ulaavarum
kanavulagam!
akkanavulagatthil
unakkaga naan kondirukkum
ethirpaarppo eraalam!
antha ethirppaarpugalin naduve
piditthavigal pidikkamal poyina;
ethilum un ninaive melongina;
inninaivil ullamum udalum
valitttha pothilum sugamayina!
Ippadi kanavodum, valiyodum
Unnaik kaanap pogum naalai
ethirnokki irukka,
Neeyo ennaik kaanathu,
en kanavugalaiyum iruttaakki
Ivvulagirkku varaathu
En karpap paiyileye iranthu,
Kidathum ettatha pokkishamanathum eno?

Cheers
Jenz
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SupriyaDinesh's Avatar
Jenz..a heart touching poem..Good work.
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Posted 15th July 2008 at 08:25 AM by SupriyaDinesh SupriyaDinesh is offline
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dear jenz,
well written poem!!!!!
regards
pavi
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Posted 15th July 2008 at 12:21 PM by pavithrasriram pavithrasriram is offline
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Dear Supriya & Pavi,

Thanks for your FB and good to know that you liked the writing through your appreciation

Cheers
Jenz
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Posted 15th July 2008 at 01:34 PM by Jenz Jenz is offline
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Anandchitra's Avatar
Jenz You are an excellent writer .. why write all sad though? Is it because great writers are more known for tragic lines?
Do keep writing.. you rock!
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Posted 15th July 2008 at 08:56 PM by Anandchitra Anandchitra is offline
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Dear Anandchitra Madam,

Very happy to have your FB in my blog. Thank you for your compliments. I am really humbled by your opinion !

It is not my intention to write sad...just that i write on things which has a deep impact on me :) [At least i think so ]

ohhhh....comparing with great writers.....no am toooooooo far....in fact, IL blog is the first place where I am publicly writing my thoughts.....have a long way to go.

Once again thanks for your compliments and the confidence that people like you have in my writing.

I will surely try to write more positive :)

Cheers
Jenz
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Posted 16th July 2008 at 01:58 AM by Jenz Jenz is offline
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Dear Jenzz !!

A very nice one and touching !!
Keep writing!!
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Posted 16th July 2008 at 02:27 AM by brindhak brindhak is offline
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You have well written the emotions of a unlucky mother !!..and penned the thoughts very nicely ..... I was much moved dear !!

Waiting for more !!
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Posted 16th July 2008 at 02:30 AM by brindhak brindhak is offline
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sujathamurthi's Avatar

Good Peom

Hai,
REally very very nice peom.. But, Why you write only sad thing.. Try to intent you in good too.
BE HAPPY
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Posted 16th July 2008 at 04:06 AM by sujathamurthi sujathamurthi is offline
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Yes I am also agree with krishnamma's points

Be happy
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Posted 16th July 2008 at 05:35 AM by jaisapmm jaisapmm is offline
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a very nice heart touching poem
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Posted 16th July 2008 at 06:09 AM by Anupamamurali Anupamamurali is offline
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எதிர்ப்ர்ப்புகளின் [ எதிர்பார்ப்பு]
போக்கிஷனதும் [பொக்கிஷமானதும்]

தட்டச்சுப் பிழைகள்.

இவை தவிர, நிறைய ஒற்றுப்பிழைகளும் இருக்க்கின்றன.
நல்ல கவிதை ரசிக்கப்பட, பிழையில்லாமல் எழுதவும் பழகுங்கள். வாழ்த்துகள்
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Posted 16th July 2008 at 11:14 AM by VSK VSK is offline
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Well written...I always thought how people could be so hard hearted to leave and kill such innocent lives after they are born...they dont realise the pain of holding the lifeless baby...ah, what a touching poem pal, just portrayed the feelings of the mother.

Hmm..I've been reading your poems off late and it has a touch of sadness in all...it really moved me.

Keep them going. I liked your blog on inflation too! Good tips.
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Posted 16th July 2008 at 12:13 PM by PoorniDaya PoorniDaya is offline
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Jenz's Avatar
Dear Brindak,

Thanks for your FB and sure will write more to make you read more

Cheers
Jenz
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Posted 16th July 2008 at 12:17 PM by Jenz Jenz is offline
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Dear Sujatha,

As I had mentioned earlier in one of my replies, it is not my intention to write sad things....but it just happens so ...but sure will take your feedback and try to write more lively and light things :)

Thanks for your FB.

Cheers
Jenz
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Posted 16th July 2008 at 12:18 PM by Jenz Jenz is offline
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Dear Jaisapmm & Anupama murali,

Good to have your FB on my blog. Thank you

Cheers
Jenz
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Posted 16th July 2008 at 12:20 PM by Jenz Jenz is offline
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Dear VSK,

Thank for having your FB on the blog and additional thanks for pointing out the mistake.

I overlooked the spelling mistake in my enthusiasm to post Sorry about that and will definitely take care of it.

Cheers
Jenz
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Posted 16th July 2008 at 12:21 PM by Jenz Jenz is offline
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Dear Poornidaya,

Thanks for your FB & Good to have your comments.
I have to watch out more what I am writing

As said in my earlier replies I shall try to post something lively and light.

Cheers
Jenz
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Posted 16th July 2008 at 12:23 PM by Jenz Jenz is offline
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It is so very moving!
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Posted 17th July 2008 at 02:20 AM by Kam45 Kam45 is offline
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Dear Kam45

Thank you for your FB.

Cheers
Jenz
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Posted 17th July 2008 at 12:05 PM by Jenz Jenz is offline
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jenz,
it was awesome.......
d pain was hard and i could feel it as i read on......
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Posted 18th July 2008 at 08:45 AM by dhivya rangarajan dhivya rangarajan is offline
 

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