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Posted 10th March 2008 at 04:27 AM by Cheeniya

Hi all!
If this attempt of mine reminds you of the cat that stripes itself with a hot iron on seeing a tiger, dont laugh! I know this poem sounds like the stories that kids tell their moms!

The Love Yonder.

The car purrs along<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p>
The sea on the left looks mystical<o:p></o:p>
The waves try to kiss the sky in a mighty heave<o:p></o:p>
It's their way of telling me<o:p></o:p>
That no matter how far you are<o:p></o:p>
You will always be within my reach.<o:p></o:p>
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The sun is blushing and dipping in the west<o:p></o:p>
Conceding defeat in matching the warmth<o:p></o:p>
Of my feelings for you.<o:p></o:p>
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The road ahead appears endless<o:p></o:p>
But driving is fun knowing you are waiting<o:p></o:p>
At the end of my long drive.<o:p></o:p>
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The rainbow rising over the sea<o:p></o:p>
Appears less colourful than my thoughts of you.<o:p></o:p>
When love reigns supreme<o:p></o:p>
The world looks as if it just had a shower<o:p></o:p>
Dressed up and perfumed.<o:p></o:p>
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How else will you explain<o:p></o:p>
The scent of a million flowers <o:p></o:p>
Wafting through the air<o:p></o:p>
At this time of the day?<o:p></o:p>
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The stars seem impatient<o:p></o:p>
To put in their appearance<o:p></o:p>
Not knowing they have no place in my heart<o:p></o:p>
Being occupied by the star of all stars.<o:p></o:p>
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<o:p>Sri</o:p>
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Sri,

Wow. Beautiful one. definitely nothing else looks beautiful or impressive when your loved one is your heart.

Posted 10th March 2008 at 05:08 AM by Shanvy

	Thank you, Shanthi for being not only the first one to read my maiden attempt at poetry but give me your generous encouragement.
	Posted 10th March 2008 at 05:41 AM by Cheeniya

Sri, Is it raining poetry in IL ?

The infectitious bug has bitten me too!

See you in the dancing waves by the ocean
See you in the scorching heat of the summer sun
See you in the serenity of moonlit night
See you in the brilliance of twinkling stars
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See you in the enticing smile of a new-born
See you in the impish grin of a toddler
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See you in the breeze that soothes my face
See you in the wind that blows very fast
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Call this hallucination, fantasy; whatever;
This is my inner world; that is the truth;
Plain and simple !
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Tell me, Sri, how much you laughed on reading this "rambling" !
Love,
Chithra. <o:p></o:p>

Posted 10th March 2008 at 07:44 AM by Chitvish Chitvish is offline

	dear Cheeniya, I did not know you can also write poetry....can't believe its ur first attempt! so full of nature , loved your visualizations of the waves, rainbow and stars......wow , in fact every line. Actually a good one with a maturity and understanding about Love......wow! So will you keep us entertained with your poetry also!
	Posted 10th March 2008 at 09:44 AM by sudhavnarasimhan

	Dear Chithra, That was a good attempt , inspired by Cheeniya! Where his was sounding like a matured Love, yours was like from a youngster! Will pass it to Rosh maybe,s he can use it with your permission! ha ha. But cute one.......
	Posted 10th March 2008 at 09:46 AM by sudhavnarasimhan

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