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Love Marriage & Arranged Marriage - Friendship Vs Love

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  1. IniyaaSri

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    Hey Priyaaa darling!!! Thank you so much for the love!!! :kissingheart::kissingheart::kissingheart:
    Lets see how the story is gonna be!! :tonguewink::tonguewink:
     
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    Episode 2:

    The moment she landed, Rachna raised her eyebrows once again “Wow!!!! How slim these women are….How come all are looking this cute….” She was busy admiring those women and Keshav patted on her shoulders… “Come… railway station is that side…”

    She just followed him… “Give your bag I will carry that….Can you manage?” asked Keshav..

    “Yeah… No problem..” replied Rachna and her legs followed his..

    The railway station was too neat and bright… It was one such big one near the airport…

    Keshav went to the station master’s office and enquired the next train timing..

    Rachna was standing on the platform with their luggage..

    “seems train will arrive at 5.17..” - Keshav

    “Ok fine. Let me sit there..” saying this she started walking…

    “Hey train is arriving in a minute…Its 5.16 now…” – Keshav raised his voice.

    “Trains wont be that punctual” Saying this she sat on the available bench..

    She sat and at once the train arrived…

    Keshav gave her an angry look…

    Oh Goddd!!! He is going to shout at me now….she took all her luggage and started walking swiftly.

    “Oh my God! Its just 5.16…why the train came now itself?” wondering about this, she came running dragging her trolley bag and the hand luggage…

    Keshav got everything from her and both got into the train in a hurry burry….

    Rachna saw the time and it was 5.17 and the train started…

    “And Rachna this is not India..keep that in mind” – Keshav said in a flat tone.

    She dnt bother to reply him.. In fact she dnt even turn towards him. She was busy seeing outside from the window…

    “How clean the country looks… Wow!!! Feel as if I can sleep on the roads without even a mat”….Rachna was busy in people watching..

    “The trains are this punctual here….?!!!!” May be once or twice I guess.. how long a government can be this perfect… Her mind was reacting to what Keshav said few seconds back and she purposely dnt reply to him..

    “Do you have something to eat in your bag?!! Am too hungry….” Keshav said..

    Rachna gave him a sandwich at once and he started eating…

    “You are not hungry?” – Keshav managed to ask her though he was busy feeding his hungry stomach..

    “No” she replied and started seeing outside…

    A person wearing a uniform came near them and asked for their tickets..

    Keshav showed them their tickets and the man replied something to Keshav and he bowed towards Keshav

    "What did he say?" - Rachna

    He said, that he is sorry for disturbing us.. and thank you so much for showing your tickets

    “What?!!! He is saying sorry for disturbing us huh?!! What for sorry?!!” - Rachna

    “Manners…” – Keshav replied wiping his hands with the tissue paper..

    Manners?!! Rachna couldn’t believe..She was surprised..At once her Indian brain flashed the scenes of how most of the government bus conductors treated the common people in the Indian buses that she use to travel….

    Both got down from the train in an hour..

    And Keshav was enquiring about hiring a taxi…

    Rachna was standing quiet…. She saw Keshav talking to someone in japanese.

    “Too much show off… As if he is the only person who learnt Japanese…” she smirked again.

    Both Rachna and Keshav started searching how to get out of the station.. It was around 5.30 and there were lots and lots of school students, office goers and many other people in the station.. Both were looking too tired after the flight travel.

    Both were wandering here and there and pulling the heavy trolley bags and suitcases..

    Rachna felt as if everyone are watching them…

    “How heavy this suitcase is… uff… my hand….” – Rachna in a raised voice

    “I can carry if you want…” - Keshav

    “No that’s ok” pulling her bag heavily she replied

    Both got into a taxi and the taxi driver was a old man.. Rachna always felt too bad whenever she saw old people employed in a job…

    “He would be 60 right?” Rachna asked him softly

    “More than 70 I think.. These people look too young.. Just minus 10 years. That should be their correct age” – Keshav replied seeing the tall buildings outside.

    Both reached the apartment which they have booked few months back…

    They were waiting for the lift to open.. It opened and a girl came smiling from ear to ear…

    She looks beautiful thought Rachna….In fact very beautiful

    Keshav and the girl spoke in Japanese and it was almost 15 minutes that Rachna was watching both of them…

    Rachna’s eyes were oscillating from Keshav to the girl, the girl to Keshav and again from Keshav…
     
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    Nice to see another lovely story from you Iniyaa...good going...
     
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    Thank you so much!!! Nice to see your comment!! :) :)
    Let me know your thoughts on future episodes too!! :blush::blush::blush:
     
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    Nice episode dear. Eagerly waiting for more.
     
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    Thank you so much dear :) :) :)
     
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    Oh wow Iniya the next story!!:banana::cheer: Happy to see it & seems to be interesting too... Could not login yesterday as it was the New year day & was busy at home. Great going..
    I always wonder how you people manage to write so fast. Reading fast is okay but writing huh.. not my cup of tea.
    I have been trying to complete my story but in last 2 months not even half done.. waiting when will i complete it & post. Lazy me:rolleyes:
     
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    Good start dear,,,, i was happy that u posted a next story... keep going dear:cheer:
     
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    Hey Leena dear!! Happy that you are happy :smile::smile:
    Oh thats nice!! Am waiting for your story dear!!! :grinning::grinning:
    And btw even I am tooo lazy :biggrin::biggrin:
     
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    Hey srilaxmi.......Thanks dear!! :) :)
    Feeling happy to see your comment!! :blush::blush::blush:
     

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