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Ghost at happy colony

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  1. Rith

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    Welcome to happy Colony!!!

    Happy colony is a wonderful condominium. Four gigantic trees are surrounded by 4 blocks A, B, C and D. Each block has around 6 flats. There will be a small walking area accompanied by a small park with basic play amenities for kids. You could see lot of people walking and relaxing in this area. Different kinds of bird’s music add more pleasant to the environment. Alarm is not all required since the morning cuckoos start singing by 4 AM onwards.

    Nowadays all are suffering on a strange stuff. GHOST!!! :evil:

    Yes! There is a ghost in this colony. No one has seen that yet. But all have experienced.
    Madhu, Reena and Nisha have lost their red saree, stole and dhupatta respectively. All are red in color

    Praveen is a 12[SUP]th[/SUP] standard student residing at A block. He has experienced someone jumping in the trees and movement of trees many times durng his night study. But he didn’t have dare to see it.

    Wednesday 13[SUP]th[/SUP] June 2015
    Rani residing at C block ordered pizza for her. She placed the box on a table and went to refresh. She heard some sound. An anklet sound!!!

    She immediately came out and found her Pizza box was opened and it is missing. She resides in 3[SUP]rd[/SUP] floor. Door was locked from inside. She was shocked. Who could come in through a locked door? She checked in balcony. Then also it is very difficult for a person to escape through balcony. And who would just steal a pizza. And whose anklet sound it could be. Her face was covered with sweat.

    Rani knocked Vimala’s house who is her neighbor. She was staying with her husband Bhooshan who is working in a private company. Rani narrated the whole thing. Since Rani was staying alone, Nirmala and Bhooshan immediately accepted to make her sleep there.

    Clock. rang 12. IT and BPO were busy. Happy colony was fast asleep. Nirmala and Rani heard anklet sound followed by the rolling sound of utensils. Bhooshan came out of the room and noticed a shadow moving fast through the balcony. When he rushed to balcony, that shadow jumped to the nearest tree and disappeared. Bhooshan stood still. He was shocked and fainted.

    Nirmala was also shocked and sat in the corner of the room. Her hands were holding hanuman photo. Rani collected some courage, went to balcony and sprinkled water on Bhooshan’s face.Bhooshan slowly opened his eyes. Seeing Rani he screamed “Aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh” Rani got frightened and screamed “Aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww” and now Niramala joined the chorus “Aaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmmmmaaaaaa” and closed her face with her hands.

    They again heard the anklet sound near the end of the big branch and a ‘krrreeeek” sound. All three jumped and went into pooja room. They applied the holy ashes all over their faces and started chanting names of lord whatever they know. They didnt get gut to move from that place.

    Bhooshan’e eyes tried to close automatically every now and then but his fear and shock opened automatically. He doesn’t want to sleep anymore. He shivers his head to make him brisk. Nirmala and Rani were frightened on his act at first. They hugged each other for support. Rani was afraid thinking ghost has come into Bhooshan’s body.
    When Bhooshan did it for thrid time, Nirmala became ferocious. She hit Bhooshan on his head and gestured him to stand still and not to make any movement.tsk :shhh:Bhooshan was shocked to see Nirmala’s reaction and kept quiet. Now all are afraid of each and every one.
    Time was passing by. Bhooshan got a nature call. He wanted to go to rest room which is in other room. He asked Nirmala to accompany. Nirmala glared at him and gave a hard look. Now he tried his luck with Rani. Rani bowed at him and begged him not to call her. Bhooshan started shaking his body unable to control. When he tried to get up, he heard the anklet sound from the trees.
    Busssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
    (You guys guess what would have happened and don’t expect me to explain in detail :lol:)

    Nirmala gave an embarrassing look where Rani closed her eyes and her nose. Bhooshan gave a shy look at Rani. Rani cursed him silently and turned her face. He could see her making some lip movement. He was not strong enough to face Nirmala. From the corner of his eyes, he tried to look at her. Nirmala gave himm all rudhramma devi and jakkamma lookdoh1. Bhooshan closed his eyes.
    Time was 4 o clock. Pooja room started stinking and hence Bhooshan. When clock stuck 4, all 3 got some courage and rushed to the next room. Bhooshan ran and grabbed a towel to clean himself. Nirmala and Rani cleaned the pooja room, lighted lamp and prayed
    Rani thought of applying leave. But feeling afraid to stay home alone, she started to office. She went there for just 5 minutes. She collected her clothes and rushed out immediately.
    At Bhoosha’s house. Bhooshan was pleading Nirmala not to tell anything about that night’s tragedy to others. For that he accepted to clean the house, cook and wash the utensils for one week.

    When sun bid goodbye to this world, fear occupied the couple’s heart. Both decided not to stay at their home that night. They packed their things and went to Nirmala’s mom house which is just 10 Km away from their place.

    Thursday 14[SUP]th[/SUP] June 2015!!!
    Praveen is having revision test the next day. He was studying in his room. By 11:30 PM he heard the same anklet sound again. He pulled the curtain. He noticed two red eyes staring at him behind the dense branch of the tree.

    He closed the curtain and rushed towards the entrance of his room. He got slipped and his spectacles fall down. When he was about to get up, he saw the shadow of something in his wall. It got bigger and bigger and anklet sound is near his windows now. His eyes was blurred without his specs. He could see that shadow standing in his window. In one shot he rushed out of his room and knocked at his parent’s room. As soon as Praveen told everything Praveen's mother placed the broom at the entrance of the door and locked it. All 3 hide themselves inside the bed sheet and closed their eyes as tightly as possible. They neither slept nor awake
    The shadow stayed near the window for some time , jumped back to the tree and disappeared!!!

    To be continued…
     
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  2. Lathasv

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    :) Rith
    interesting to read ghost story.I wanna be there at happy colony to see ghost :)
    waiting for continuation part.
     
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    Ha ha. You are welcome to Happy colony always @lathasv
     
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    Oh my god rith, i just loved the way you have narrated the story. Waiting for the next part.
     
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    Very Interesting story Rith, waiting for next part.
     
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    Then , I will pack my stuff and go there :) so excited
     
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    Wow rith intersting ghost story
    Waiting for next part
     
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    Thank you Priya. Glad to know you like it :thankyou2:
     
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    Thank you @pinkydarling. Ghost Biriyani is getting ready. Will be served hot by today evening
     
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    :thankyou2: ssudhan. Glad to know you like it
     

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