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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Nov 16, 2018.

  1. rgsrinivasan

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    I will be calling you tonight
    Hopefully, if I live that long.
    Please pick it to make it bright
    For me and sing that lovely song.

    Meaningless! Yes this war is! But
    All wars bring that empty feel
    To all who'd vowed to get
    Over their foes with a mind of steel.

    What will you get after seeing
    So many die around you? Huh!
    Our life is far too worth living
    Than dying. Often truth is raw.

    There lies that beast in each of us
    Which makes us to believe that we are
    The best and forces us to mess
    Things up, We end up as just mere.

    Find someone kind and good for you.
    Don't waste your life, just like me.
    You don't have to remember me.
    This letter may not reach you too!
     
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    Thank you @Anjelin for your quick appreciation :) -rgs
     
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    Wow wow wow.... the ill effects of war and the beauty of hand written letter, intricately woven in the beautiful poem.
     
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    Thanks @nandinimithun for your like and an overwhelming appreciation to this post. -rgs
     
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