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Be My Muse, Dear Sea

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by creativemind23, Aug 30, 2016.

  1. Aug 30, 2016 #1
    creativemind23

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    My muse you are
    heavy deep sea
    for you carry memories old
    and hopes new


    You never cease to amaze me
    with the beauty of your shimmering waves
    laced with frosty froth
    coming with longing to kiss the shore
    dancing back with mirth
    I wish I were like you dear sea.

    Day or night
    your charm never fades
    Tides may run high or low
    you take everything in your stride,
    you never let it show,
    I wish I were like you dear sea.

    I wish I were like you
    difficult to read
    but gorgeous to see

    That's why you are my muse
    and will always be!
     
    creativemind23, Aug 30, 2016
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  2. Aug 30, 2016 #2
    Lathasv

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    Beautiful poem on sea... I too like to look at sea , walk on seashore and listen to sounds of waves...:)
    And one more thing " wish I were like you
    difficult to read
    but gorgeous" that is nice....
     
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    creativemind23

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    Thank you very much. True. The sea fascinates many.
     
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    Caide

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    yeah particularly sunset and sunrise is a amazing scene from beach and rainy days wahh lovely poem
     
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    Thank you Caide... glad you liked it
     
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